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Mother In Law

My mother in law has died and was buried today. Although apart from her son this past ten years, she and I continued to maintain our loving relationship. Never judgmental and kind to her core, we shared many happy outings in her final years. Christmas concerts, cinema dates and butterfly gardens. Her son and I had not spoken since our acrimonious split. But this summer, she talked of my joining their Xmas table. I said I would, knowing in my heart she could not last until then. Sleepless last night, she came to me unknowing, in spirit. How else can I explain the change in my heart? Before the service, I sympathised, forgave and asked for forgiveness. In the presence of our eldest child, he and I embraced once again. Her love inspiring me from the afterlife to forgive at last. Renewed in faith for a hopeful future, I am free of past hurts. Her parting gift to me. 23/10/2019 For contest Writing Challenge 2, November - A Poem Meaningful Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wisshkobi Ode

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Date: 11/20/2019 3:46:00 PM
Jean congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful sad poem !
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Jean Murray
Date: 11/20/2019 5:24:00 PM
Thank you for the placement. This one came from deep within.
Date: 11/10/2019 4:29:00 PM
I am sure it was very therapeutic to write the poem and you are able to move on from the past and she is at peace in many ways:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jean Murray
Date: 11/10/2019 4:36:00 PM
She was such a pure spirit Jan. The last time we met was on her birthday on October 6th. When I gave her her gift, she looked up at me and said."It was lovely to know you." One of those precious moments we never forget.
Date: 11/10/2019 4:16:00 PM
oh well, im sad to hear about your mother in law, but happy your remained good friends... nice to see you embraced him, i hope he has learnt the error of his ways...
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Jean Murray
Date: 11/10/2019 4:27:00 PM
Now Silent...that is wishful thinking....
Date: 10/24/2019 12:40:00 AM
What a beautiful poem, full of love and meaning! I loved my late mother in law, too. She was a kind and giving person. Your poem makes me think of her.
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/24/2019 1:06:00 AM
That's lovely Evelyn. They have bad reputations but I was blessed, just as you were.
Date: 10/23/2019 3:46:00 PM
a very touching poem, jean! you are fortunate to have had a relationship with your mother-in-law that outlasted your marriage and i love the way you've ended this poem, crediting her with your ability to forgive...
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/23/2019 3:59:00 PM
It came from nowhere Ilene. I give her the credit. She deserves it.
Date: 10/23/2019 3:31:00 PM
Absolutely lovely, Jean.
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/23/2019 3:56:00 PM
Thank you Line.
Date: 10/23/2019 1:54:00 PM
- Feel this is a true story, Jean - Both beautiful and sad, gives me lump in the throat - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/23/2019 2:15:00 PM
Thank you. Yes it's true Anna-Lise. I find poetry a wonderful way of expressing emotion laden moments. It has helped me through many dark times, as you know.

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