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Morning's Releasing

Into the wind the heart speaks the words that stay hidden from all others. Joining with them the heart spent words spoken by sisters and brothers. The leaves of the trees seem to gather, with ease, every heart-spent phrase. Waving them each to the heavens in turn then releasing them in the breeze. ©Debra Squyres 2013

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/29/2013 7:11:00 AM

- Debra, I "jump in" at your poem to wish you a HAPPY NEW YEAR! - Hope all is well with you !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Funom Makama

Date: 11/21/2013 8:20:00 AM

This is splendid and beautiful. Good write friend and keep the fire burning. its really nice coming across such a piece in a lovely day like this. Cheers! Funom Makama.

Robert Johnson

Date: 10/6/2013 4:48:00 PM

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Ken Carroll

Date: 8/29/2013 6:15:00 AM

Hi Debra, A refreshing write to read today.. Ken

Robert Johnson

Date: 8/12/2013 4:09:00 PM

The breeze in the trees seem to whisper Louise. :) The language of nature speaks in spiritual tounge. A new born heart will always feel young. And the heavens will open to shine down it's light. Each morning when God's hand make's everything right. So good to hear from you again Debra. Hope the vacation was all you needed it to be. Peace. :)

Christine Phillips

Date: 8/12/2013 2:33:00 PM

Nice contrast used in this poem. The wind, the heart and the trees. Nice work.

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/12/2013 12:23:00 PM

I really enjoyed how you brought in the power of the trees within this write, the natural scene within your poem is extraordinary my friend! I truly loved reading this lovely piece this afternoon! What a powerful poemm your have written here, Debra! Great Work!!

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/12/2013 8:50:00 AM

An adjoining of peace, serenity, & appreciation for the new day life gifts to us. This was wonderful!