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Morning Wait

the hour is past, the sky overcast and the chill feels heavier on a drooping shoulder ships have come, and gone like the last biscotti for the little one, she worries her hand maybe they should just go home where there might still be some warmth left in the morning’s espresso she never thought she would have to look for warmth, she had always had the rush of heat from his arms somehow the cobbled walk seems much longer, harder than when they set out at dawn maybe tomorrow morning the quay will be less cold, and the sky a little brightened with his return After: Morning at the Quay in Venice by Helen Allingham For Debbie Guzzi's Challenge: Ten Pictures, Ten Poems, Ten Days - Painting 9 Kim Patrice Nunez 15 January 2016

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Date: 1/21/2016 7:32:00 PM
excellent write Kim, awesome...
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Date: 1/17/2016 11:10:00 AM
Tough feelings for those who can only watch and wait.
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Date: 1/17/2016 6:36:00 AM
very interesting....nd creative.
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Date: 1/16/2016 5:29:00 PM
Kim, you are a wonderful poet.... Wonderful painted picture.... SKAT
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Date: 1/16/2016 12:50:00 PM
well, you are a chart-topper and definitely unstoppable!... how poignant, kim... did you mean 'brightened'...congrats on this featured poem.. GO!..huggs
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Date: 1/16/2016 8:54:00 PM
Thanks again, Nettie. Hope the muse will always be here... About that one word, yes, and will revise accordingly...luv ya...huggs!
Date: 1/16/2016 7:37:00 AM
Much enjoyable Kim. Even-though without the post of pic, it depicts image that bring your write to life in sense of the reader..........A.M.
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Date: 1/16/2016 5:44:00 AM
excellent write Kim, mind blowing
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Date: 1/15/2016 8:21:00 PM
Congrats on your poem winning in painting #9 Kim...nicely done
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Date: 1/15/2016 5:44:00 PM
this is very lovely, Kim. About putting picture image, are you going to the icon for images first? That is the only way I can get them to post!
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Date: 1/15/2016 5:16:00 PM
Looks to me as if you painted the picture with your words.I know that painting.Well done.
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Date: 1/15/2016 4:40:00 PM
You are taking this challenge by storm Kim fabulous write with such powerful imagery:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/15/2016 4:34:00 PM
A beautiful write Kim, I felt the emotion and absence in this write. Thanks or sharing....Sharon
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