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Morning Sunshine Song

Another day is dawning and the Sun is rising high he's dancing in the gentle breeze across the morning sky! The birds call out their greetings as the Sun winks his hello and I'm happy just to be here to watch this morning grow! I see the little flowers as they're shaking off their dreams my spirit swims among them all within their rainbow streams! The air sings with their perfume in a fragrant melody and I float in their sweetness like a love struck bumble bee! Another day has started all its wonders I behold the Sun is smiling down on me he's filling me with gold! Everything is beautiful when Sunshine lights the skies I know I'm blessed to see the world through these enchanted eyes!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/13/2009 8:10:00 PM
Fine introduction to the new spring season! After snow and cold the bright sun comes out to shine. Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/6/2009 3:32:00 PM
this poem is enchanted truly....with the magic of only ur pen it coulda been written....nice work done here!...love Maryam~
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Date: 4/1/2009 9:33:00 AM
Hi Robin, a very nice personification. Witingly done. Ernilando
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Date: 4/1/2009 8:37:00 AM
Pheeewwwwwww thank God my girl!! My Robin Zippitty Dooo Daa! Thank you Love me
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Date: 3/31/2009 7:05:00 AM
Dear Robin, YOU have captured enraptured the very essence of a Beautiful new day The Imagery creates a new respect for the Sunrise the beginning of a Glorious new day I am awed by the wonderful feeling of life anew YOU Penned here Amazing Talent Thank-YOU for the touching comments ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 3/27/2009 6:27:00 PM
Excellent write Robin. Love the flow. Thank for your comments, much appreciated. Belinda
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Date: 3/27/2009 3:55:00 PM
Nice use of personification. Such an uplifting view. Makes me think of spring--can't wait for it to come. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comments on mine. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 3/25/2009 3:34:00 PM
A masterful illustrated painting Robin. Loved the imagery and the flow was nice...Raul
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Date: 3/25/2009 2:06:00 PM
This is a most inspiring poem, and you have such a genius in you to have composed it. God bles you
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Date: 3/25/2009 9:36:00 AM
Thanks for you welcome comments today Robin.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/25/2009 7:05:00 AM
Just wonderful makes me want to launch in to my rendition of Zippity Doo Dah!!! Like Brair Rabbit! Love Ya PS I would like a bit of punctuation (grin)
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Date: 3/25/2009 6:58:00 AM
Ahh, like a breath of fresh air! So absolute beautiful and yes, enchanting too dear Robin!:) Again you have exhibited your pure and wonderful heartful and soulful depths and imagination! Flowing like a river this write is! Very beautiful! Love to you dear, john!!:) A splendid write....
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Date: 3/25/2009 1:23:00 AM
Sun,Spring= inspiration Robin.Nice work.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 3/24/2009 6:58:00 PM
Shoot makes me want to break out i song Robin. You must've been lookin towards KY~
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Date: 3/24/2009 3:57:00 PM
You always give us such war, beautiful images, Robin. Seeing the world through the sun's eyes provides a very creative view of the life below. This "world" is one I long to see as well. Incredible work, Robin!
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Date: 3/24/2009 2:57:00 PM
The air sings with perfume....the sun filling you with gold...I am digging this write...lots of color flowing.
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Date: 3/24/2009 1:39:00 PM
Such beauty you have captured within the hopefulness and promise of morning. My spirit soars too with the magic of nature all around us. The season is nearing. Wonderful to read such gorgeous imagery. Such an excellent write. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/24/2009 1:03:00 PM
wonderfully written.....everything seems so beautiful from your poem....great write!..it made me smile...~love Maryam~
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Date: 3/24/2009 12:58:00 PM
wonderfully done everything is indeed beautiful
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Date: 3/24/2009 11:40:00 AM
..."love struck bumble bee"...LOVE IT!!! What wonderful imagery! I feel like I've walked though a morning garden and am covered in dew! Great Poem! Glad you liked my Jumbled poem also, it was fun to write! thanks for your comments Robin! Truely, Trudy
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Date: 3/24/2009 10:44:00 AM
a wonderful morning... i love these bright days! a great write from you Robin! ~ Arany
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Date: 3/24/2009 8:53:00 AM
Hi Robin A beautiful poem, what a difference the sun makes, I can't wait for summer now. we have been blessed with beauty all around which you have wonderfully described. God bless. Leon
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Date: 3/24/2009 8:34:00 AM
Such a day brightener!! Lovely poem, Robin!! As pretty as your name!! ~ :) love, Carrie
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Date: 3/24/2009 8:26:00 AM
I enjoy my mornings and watching the day awake as well a beautiful write, very nice!
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