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Morning Joy

As the morning softly wakens to the birds sweet early call she graces me with beauty as she lights upon my wall My gaze draws to my window sill as sleep falls from my eyes my blessing is the joy I feel to see the morning rise Looking toward the heavens thankful for this day of days my joy is turning golden with the dawns first splendid rays Thought I'd give you a little sunshine to balance out the dark! Love Robin

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Susan Palli

Date: 2/20/2010 7:27:00 AM

Such a beautiful poem. It raised my spirits

John Freeman

Date: 10/6/2009 4:30:00 PM

Beautiful flowing like a river Rhyme Robin. She arrived with beauty, lights upon your wall, and begins flowing like a river through your thankgiving, as dawns first splendid rays. Awesome poem girl. Sincerely, Love, Moses

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/24/2009 9:38:00 PM

wow...sweet but it's after 12 and I had too much caffine too late and a migraine and I want to go to sleep LOL..Loves ya..go to bed!

Brian Strand

Date: 9/21/2009 8:38:00 AM

Thank you for your welcome comments today Robin.Rgds Brian

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/20/2009 12:35:00 PM

Uplifting and joyful...thank you for this wonderful poem! ~ Carrie

James Fraser

Date: 9/20/2009 4:25:00 AM

Beautiful piece Robin, a joy to read on this Sunday morning>>James

Brian Strand

Date: 9/20/2009 12:49:00 AM

Thank you for your welcome comments today Robin Rgds Brian

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 9/19/2009 11:32:00 AM

Dear Robin, Thank-YOU for the sunshine written extreemly well Thank-YOu for Your many Gracious comments I am having computer problems so i use the half hour at the Library LOVE YOU and YOURS ALWAYS...HG

Sue Mason

Date: 9/19/2009 9:56:00 AM

Sometimes I wake up and even if the sun isn't shining, I feel like you've expressed here!! When you're 66 years old just to wake up is heaven ... LOL ... thanks for being at the Soup, Robin and for all your comments. Sorry I haven't gotten back around to you sooner ... there are tooooooooo many folks here!! ... smile ... Oh, yes did I already get your day/month for my birthday calendar?

John Loving Iii

Date: 9/17/2009 5:03:00 PM

sweet dawning poem thank you for your comments. jhl

Abe Lopez

Date: 9/17/2009 12:24:00 PM

the start of the day is my favorite hours of the 24... peaceful write filled with hope!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/17/2009 7:27:00 AM

Just what I need this morning since it is solid cloudy this morning. God gives mountain top experiences but we also get the valleys and the gloom sometimes. Sara

Brian Strand

Date: 9/16/2009 11:52:00 PM

Robin thanks for your welcome comments today/Rgds Brian

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/16/2009 1:22:00 PM

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/16/2009 8:42:00 AM

Beautiful poem, Robin! So refreshing to read an uplifting piece. Love the way you greet each new day! Nice imagery and perfect form. Love, Carolyn

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 9/16/2009 5:30:00 AM

Robin, Reading your poetry this morning has been a wonderful way to start the day. Thank you for sharing beautiful words. Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Elaine George

Date: 9/16/2009 12:21:00 AM

Thank you Robin. I needed that. Love, lainie, and thank you for your continued support. it means so much to me. Love, Lainie

Brian Strand

Date: 9/16/2009 12:17:00 AM

So positive Robin,especially like verse 2.Thanks for your welcome comments today and soupmail.Rgds Brian

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/15/2009 5:47:00 PM

thanks! Robin! I enjoyed reading this!...jim

John Freeman

Date: 9/15/2009 5:14:00 PM

You awoke a beautiful day in me by the way, you say a beautiful day in your rhyme in your beautiful day. I love it. Sincerely, Moses Your comments always welcome and appreciated.

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/15/2009 4:29:00 PM

You brought joy to my day with this beautiful poem, excellent work...Raul

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/15/2009 4:25:00 PM

smmmmmmmmmoochhhh! 2 more lines and you have a sonnet!!! separate by 4's ..reminds me of zippity doda!

Date: 9/15/2009 3:21:00 PM

Enjoyed this uplifting view. Tomorrow is my day off and I hope to have a day like this. Blessings to you for sharing your poem with us. Thank you for the kind words on my haiku. Keep on writing!!!! Karen

Savannah Rose Harper

Date: 9/15/2009 1:02:00 PM

"as the morning softly wakens" marvelous!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/15/2009 12:18:00 PM

Love your sunshine Robin. Thank you for sharing it with us. Love, Carol