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Morning Coffee This morning over my breakfast of toast and first coffee I became lost in the black grounds at the bottom of my cup, the gritty end of the line for that cherry-red berry, abducted from it’s misty origin, roasted, toasted, blackened to near-charcoal, then ground without mercy and doused in boiling water, drained and discarded into oblivion, forgotten – the end of a tragic tale. It must have been one of those all too rare moments when my fuzzy psyche parted to consider other possibilities for that life-to-death-to-discard cycle. Along its often painful path that berry gave a measure of security to those who tended it, loved it for its potential, then sent it along to its destiny. The struggles it endured gave livelihood to many (some in excess of their worth), and considerable pleasure at the end. However, with considerate and careful attention from those who appreciate its arduous path there is rebirth to a new life and form, another opportunity to share the goodness implicit in those red-ripe berries taken not so very long ago. Each spring morning after the news of the day and my first cup I add the dregs to my garden compost, and give thanks through my kitchen window for the wonder and glory that is life; the violet passion flowers in my garden attest to the true value of sacrifice. 01.02.2013

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Date: 10/17/2014 1:54:00 AM
Stunningly well written, Jack! Such vivid descriptions and profound thoughts over something so simple as a morning cup of coffee. And you've concluded it superbly! The true value of sacrifice... laying down your life so that others may have it more abundantly.
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Date: 4/27/2014 4:19:00 AM
Jack... Congratulations. Thank you for the support. XOX~ Linda
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Date: 4/27/2014 4:50:00 PM
Thank you, Linda.. Jack
Date: 2/12/2014 8:35:00 AM
nice one goes with my morning Coffee. SKAT
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Date: 2/13/2014 6:22:00 PM
Great! I'm glad you liked it... Jack
Date: 2/10/2014 6:02:00 PM
This is absolute poetic perfection. Just reading through some of my favorite poet's work today. An admirable piece of work :)
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Date: 2/13/2014 6:23:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Karen... Jack
Date: 1/9/2014 7:34:00 PM
this is a NEAT poem and I love how you give back to nature. BIG congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 2/13/2014 6:24:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 1/9/2014 12:46:00 AM
A beautiful poem, I enjoyed it and congrats on your win, Jack
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Date: 1/8/2014 12:37:00 PM
congratulations Jack xx
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Date: 2/13/2014 6:22:00 PM
Thanks, Mandy... Jack
Date: 1/7/2014 3:32:00 PM
Hello my friend Jack, . Congratulations, and thank you for entering my contest. It has been a delight hosting so many contests. If you like you can enjoy the hugs, I left all winning poems on my blog "I WILL BE FAITHFUL." link-------> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=18505&PoetID=18720 <----- Enjoy and stop by if you'd like...... Always & Forever ** LINDA
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Date: 1/7/2014 5:20:00 PM
And thank you, Linda... Jack
Date: 1/7/2014 2:38:00 PM
LONG LIVE COFFEE yes sir this is life to many of us, love your write I'll drink to the last drop of your write. cheri
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Date: 1/7/2014 3:27:00 PM
Thank you, Cheri. Yes, coffee, the magic elixer... Jack
Date: 1/7/2014 9:09:00 AM
I really enjoyred resding this whilst drinking my cuppa and gazing at the flowers in my yard..I got thinking about each verse you ve written dear..Excellent!!!
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Date: 1/7/2014 9:31:00 AM
Thank you, Charmain. Flowers are a gift from where you live. For me just now it's ice and dead plants, so I've written about my visions of he future, I guess... Jack
Date: 1/4/2014 2:46:00 PM
- A quiet moment with pleasure and afterthoughts - nice to read Jack - Well written! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/4/2014 4:59:00 PM
As always, thank you... Jack
Date: 1/4/2014 1:06:00 PM
This is great Jack, I would have never given the coffee grouds another thought. You have given me a new appreciation for the simple and marvelous circle of life.
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Date: 1/4/2014 1:57:00 PM
Thanks, Richard. Perhaps it comes from looking closely for haiku material for quite a while now. Or, who knows... Jack
Date: 1/2/2014 5:12:00 PM
WHAT AN INSPIRING POEM TO START MY DAY ,JACK!!! .^__^ ..a cup of coffee(actually its 4 cups) completes my day ..awe penned!!! ..// have a great day to you! =))
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