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More Than a Lover's Quarrel

We, savages to our desires, chained, lips torch, spew fire. Our contorted faces, vengeful words, secret hiding places, strike fear. Prisoners of paisley pasts, expectations cling evermore, our broken hearts kindle flames of passion in love and war. I rest in our sweeter hours - orange blossoms, tender vines touched, tangled flush of skin warmed soft in breath. Gentle winds passed through my pores in our thriving, blushing flower garden of summer light. Charms adorned, seduction worn, a rush of ecstasy - you and I, hands in earth, nurturing our love in full bloom. I remember splash of golden sun on hottest days and blazing dark-winged sky of ardent nights. Never, never could I forget. Now, we bury ourselves deep, dried up in bitter weeds of neglected, barren soil. Recoiled in contempt, we ache for forgiveness as our weary souls weep behind dry eyes filled with icy rage. Is love enough to break our chains of jealousy, our suspicion, our lies? When you’re alone, I wonder, do you cry? I do...I wade in my lonely tears. When I'm alone, I weep for you. Tomorrow, I will lay down my weapons for you, tend once again to our delicate blooms. I beg you to search your heart, find within our maze of destructive days, our greenest paths, time renewed in clouds of rain to nourish love again. I beg you to open your wilted blooms to a healing sun. I still hold steady to lost petals of you and I. I believe in us. I pray for the heavy air between us to lift until still, and I pray you love me still. Written 3/6/17 for Lover's Quarrel Contest

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Date: 3/10/2017 4:08:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, with real emotions Rhonda - Good luck in the contest - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/9/2017 8:24:00 AM
Amazing write by a superb poet. Love the broken shape and the healing words. An excellent read.
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Date: 3/8/2017 11:28:00 PM
This is so powerful, yet I know the feelings well.
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Date: 3/7/2017 5:12:00 PM
wow, Rhonda. AMAZING. If you do not get a win, I will be shocked!! SEVEN
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Date: 3/7/2017 3:13:00 PM
love prevails through the test of time..lovely write, rhonda.. huggs
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Date: 3/7/2017 8:58:00 AM
You expressed this so poeticly and made it feel real. I hope for your sake it is not. For me I guard my most precious of relationships and choose to speak love into our relationship. As a result my sweetie and God have greatly blessed me.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 3/7/2017 9:07:00 AM
Hi Richard, you're very sweet. Thank God this is only fiction inspired by the contest theme. My husband and I have been together since high school. I'm blessed with a kind man. Thanks for the visit!
Date: 3/6/2017 3:43:00 PM
funny thing about love, it is actually the way your poem described...like a bright warm morning in the beginning and like a cold dark night when it ends..in the evening we try to make it dawn again with wishes and dreams
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Date: 3/6/2017 11:38:00 AM
Sounds like a relationship that has taken a wrong turn somewhere throughout the years together and one is desperately trying to rekindle or keep the flames of love and understanding alive. Nicely done Rhonda.
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