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(First 9 stanzas by Charles Messina, Sponsor)
Gonna wake up At the brink of dawn Take a shower Throw my blue jeans on The little red rooster Is my alarm ****-a-doodle doodling On my farm Gonna water All of my crops Especially My barley and hops Gonna spread out All the bales of hay Where the goats and the horses And the cattle stay In the pasture Down by the creek Where we went When we wanted to sneak A little moonshine I stole it from my dad The best damn moonshine That I ever had I'm gonna go And see a little rodeo Then I'm going dancing To do the do-si-doe Then I'll stop by Over near the school To jump in the river In our swimming pool Gonna get my little lady A cold bottle of wine And get myself a bottle Of my dad's moonshine We'll be a parkin' Up at Lover's Lane Snugglin' and kissin' And feelin' no pain August 16, 2018 Add a Stanza to My Poem Contest By charles messina Added last stanza

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Date: 8/29/2018 4:14:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/30/2018 6:02:00 AM
Thank you, Sara.
Date: 8/28/2018 3:07:00 PM
Love your addition to Charlie's poem, Susan...Congratulations on your win!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/30/2018 6:01:00 AM
Thanks, Eve. :)
Date: 8/28/2018 1:47:00 PM
Brilliant! Loved this Susan. Congrats on your win :)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/30/2018 6:00:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 8/28/2018 8:47:00 AM
Congrats on your win Susan
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/30/2018 6:00:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 8/28/2018 7:41:00 AM
Susan, are you sure you didn't write my original poem, I absolutely love the stanza you added. I went back and forth between selecting a few poems for 1st and this was one. Finally, I flipped a coin lol Thank you so much for entering my contest and a huge Congratulations on your win! :) Charlie
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/30/2018 5:59:00 AM
Oh my. Such a wonderful comment. I am honored to have placed. This was fun and I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for sponsoring and for all you do.
Date: 8/28/2018 3:42:00 AM
Congratulations, Susan on your win.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/30/2018 5:57:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 8/17/2018 9:56:00 PM
What a great ending stanza you've added to Charlie's wonderful poem, Susan. It fits seamlessly both poetically and rhythmically. Love it! Best wishes for a win! ~Sussn
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/18/2018 6:54:00 AM
Thank you, Susan!

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