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So slowly dancing in Time's chilling solitude bewildering the shadows in Love's diary- desolately She stares as Hope's unwavering beacon Moonlight Delight Contest 09/07/2017

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Fj Thomas

Date: 3/7/2018 3:58:00 PM

Charlie this is most beautiful. Of course I do favor poems that involve the Moon. But not everyone can capture its beauty the way you have.

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/8/2018 1:34:00 PM

Thank you Shadow...

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/2/2017 8:40:00 PM

Ohh lonely lunar... Just lovely Charlie. Such a beautifully written poem with exquisite imagery and depth. Enjoyed so much! :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 10/3/2017 7:59:00 AM

Thank you Susan...

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/26/2017 4:24:00 PM

I love the awesome imagery, flow and beauty of this piece! Makes me feel like dancing under the mystical light of a full moon - full of hope. Thank you Charlie for a most enjoyable read. Best wishes. Pandita

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/26/2017 9:58:00 PM

Thank you Pandita.

White Wolf

Date: 9/19/2017 8:35:00 PM

Oh, I do love this so, Charlie! An outstanding write, my friend

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/20/2017 7:21:00 AM

Thank you MR. Wolf...

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/19/2017 10:56:00 AM

Hello Charlie, I am back. I can see this person dancing in the moonlight. Yes it would be nice to be dancing in the moon light with your sweetheart. I have this dream every night, the figure always changes, I never know whom it is. have a nice day my friend.

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/19/2017 11:18:00 AM

Thank you Darlene.

John Hamilton

Date: 9/19/2017 8:03:00 AM

Times chilling solitude, love that line, just a wonderful sedoka Charlie!

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/19/2017 11:18:00 AM

Thank you John.

Lynn Marie

Date: 9/15/2017 11:30:00 PM

One can never be lost enveloped with love, the moon and hope. Breathtaking Charlie:) a fave

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/16/2017 7:40:00 AM

Thank you very much Lynn.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 9/13/2017 10:06:00 PM

Beautiful write, Charlie - enjoyed it very much. Blessings and congrats on your win! :-)

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/14/2017 6:15:00 AM

Thank you Greg, I value your comments very highly...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/12/2017 12:29:00 AM

Very,very beautiful Charlie! Congratulations on a deserving second placement! : )

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/12/2017 11:05:00 AM

Thank you Connie.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/10/2017 11:38:00 AM

Hope will do that! We all need it and the moonlight!

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/11/2017 11:03:00 AM

Yes we do, thank you Kim.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/9/2017 4:12:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/10/2017 10:37:00 PM

Thank you Eve.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/9/2017 1:59:00 PM

- Congratulations on your beautiful 2nd place, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/10/2017 10:36:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/9/2017 6:48:00 AM

Congratulations Charlie :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/9/2017 10:38:00 AM

Thanks Heidi.

John Michaels

Date: 9/9/2017 6:20:00 AM

Very interesting take on the theme, Charlie... "Time's chilling solitude" is a great line. Congrats on your high-placed win! Regards, John.

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/9/2017 10:38:00 AM

Thank you John.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/9/2017 6:09:00 AM

Congrats Charlie!

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/9/2017 10:38:00 AM

Thank you Vijay.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2017 9:06:00 PM

Charlie I think you used a lot of creativity here. I have not read many of the Moonlight sedokas yet but of the few I saw, I think yours is one of the very best. Did you mean "at" in line five?

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/8/2017 11:14:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. Luna stares at us as a beacon of hope. That's what I was trying to say. Might have come across a bit awkward, but thanks for your constructive question, I do always value all the help I can get.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2017 9:06:00 PM

instead of as.

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/8/2017 10:56:00 PM

No.