Moonlight

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Moonlight shadows glisten like sparkling diamonds on lapping waves which wash over our toes as we stroll barefooted along the shore of the deserted beach how I love evening walks with you in the moonlight Diamonds counted as 3 syllables* Contest: Rictameter Me Sponsor: White Wolf 8/26/18

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Paul Callus

Date: 9/28/2018 1:44:00 PM

I love the content and smooth flow of this romantic Rictameter, Jan. Hugs // paul

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/29/2018 8:06:00 AM

Lovely, Jan.

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/27/2018 6:46:00 PM

Wonderfully done my dear friend. Just such a romantic stroll I took with my (then)fiance my wife of 14 years now, at Boracay Resort, very late at night when the white sand beach was deserted and the moon was so romantically beaming done. A fav my friend.. a gem too..

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/27/2018 2:28:00 AM

Awwww....sweet, my dear. You write romantic well! :) Thanks for your visit to my Be Silent poem. I've been away for a while...hope to get back into the swing of things.

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/26/2018 9:57:00 PM

The beauty of your poem is enchanting, Jan.. superb poetry! Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/26/2018 8:47:00 PM

This poem is very lovely Jan! It flows so smoothly with stunning imagery to match the picture. I don't see why it would not do wonderfully in the contest. I have never written one either. I may write one too if my muse comes out of hiding. : )

Arturo Michael

Date: 8/26/2018 6:05:00 PM

Yes...nice one...so natural...All the best Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 8/26/2018 6:09:00 PM

Thanks so much Arturo:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/26/2018 5:12:00 PM

this is just beautiful, jan! i especially love the "lapping waves washing over our toes."

Jan Allison
Date: 8/26/2018 5:38:00 PM

Thanks so much Ilene, its my first attempt at the form I do hope the sponsor likes it, as its a premiere contest places are limited so I understand if it doesn't place:-) hugs Jan xx