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Moonbeam Visit

moon cradle swings slow cloud curtains billow softly starry night lights blink amidst black velvet blanket... as wind croons a lullaby dreamy dust settles sparkling against silken strands as moonbeam peeks through Sandman plants a sweet dream's kiss-- slumbering beauty breathes deep 120320111230p106 **for Tracie's Moonlight Dreams contest :D

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Anne Rutherford

Date: 12/18/2011 8:58:00 AM

A capivating dream like poem Nikko. no wonder it won!!! Anne

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/13/2011 9:18:00 AM

A lullaby to dream with Nikko. Not only for babies but I feel the peace and see all the magic you portray. Just lovely!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/9/2011 4:37:00 AM

Nikko~Go back and read A Winter's Kiss...see the note at the bottom...(hint hint). Wink wink. ;)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/6/2011 11:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Moonlight Dreams" contest Nikko. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/5/2011 2:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your win x

Bob Quigley

Date: 12/4/2011 8:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Nikko. Well written.

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/4/2011 5:36:00 AM

hey there Missy ;) I absolutley love the idea of the wind crooning (not sure about the word) lol.. That made me smile, reminded me about the lullaby thing hehe.. Congratulations on your win in the contest as well. Hope your weekend's been a great one ;) *mwahugs*

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/4/2011 3:55:00 AM

Congratulation on your fantastic win, my friend. bl

Dalila Agtani

Date: 12/3/2011 8:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Nikko! I have been counting my Tanka and posted it last night on the moonlight contest and I am so happy to see my name below yours. Yes, I am back in Seattle, but my dream vacation is still lingering in my mind. I enjoyed the local food pati "kambing". The Ilocanos make pulutan out of this. (I am not sure if you are familiar with this food). You might say ykks! Love Dalila Dalila

Daver Austin

Date: 12/3/2011 11:53:00 AM

Like the first line, the rest as well. Great to hear about happy, peaceful dreams and slumbering beauties. Love, daver

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/3/2011 11:12:00 AM

Lovely poem and the sandman did come to visit me last night. Thanks for all your comments. Good luck in the contest. love phyl

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/3/2011 9:35:00 AM

Oh, lovely and sweet, Nikko!! Just as dreamy as that sweet avatar picture!! I knew you must have been a beautiful baby!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/3/2011 9:01:00 AM

Simply beautiful, Nikko. I am seeing lots of good entries in this contest. I hope they all make the list and yours swinging at the top! Yes, I still love french fries, Nikko. but I realize potatoes are one of the worst foods a blood type O like me can eat. It's horrible for people with arthritis. I still have them maybe once a month. I don't dare eat more!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 12/3/2011 8:32:00 AM

lovely, Nikko! jimbo

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 12/3/2011 5:58:00 AM

beautiful tanka for the contest nikko, some really dreamy imagery, this has to be one of the best I've read, it should place very high :-)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/3/2011 5:04:00 AM

I love your take on the contest. Flowing images across my screen. Hugs all day for you. Luv Michael

David Williams

Date: 12/3/2011 4:49:00 AM

Nikko very dreamy indeed, good luck, ps. if you had said silver strands you could have entered it in Susan's/ Andrea's contest as well, double whammy..David

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/3/2011 2:06:00 AM

Just charming I love the line [as moonbeam peeks through] Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/2/2011 10:55:00 PM

wow Nikko, what a visit... I like toooo visual the sand man kissing my forehead... so i can nite nite.. wish he was here right now... giving me a slumber with deep breathes.... BUT NO! the tooth fairy,, always has to get me with that toothache... lol.. anyways... Good luck in this moonlight contest... Tracie sure has pretty themes...have a nice one..p.d.