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Moon Dance

Once upon a time so brightly I had this compulsion to dance Just holding you oh so tightly; In thoughts of romantic perchance Realistic dreams of nuance. Your silver beam of love the lure Bathed in splendour ever so pure In breath upon the breeze clement; Held here within your light the cure I thank the lord for this moment. © Harry J Horsman 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/18/2020 12:40:00 PM
oh yes, that most beautiful memory engrained forever on the mind, something I write of so often myself. I see that since I last visited this one, you won a contest with it. Back in 2016, so a very belated congrats for that, Harry.
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Date: 1/26/2016 9:37:00 PM
Harry, Congrats on your Moonish win. Luv LINDA -
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Date: 1/14/2016 1:08:00 PM
This poem is very beautiful Harry. I see why it is a top winner. Congratulations my friend!
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Date: 1/14/2016 4:10:00 AM
Congrats on awesome win with this wonderful write harry!
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Date: 1/13/2016 10:37:00 PM
Harry, Congrats on your win............ Luv ** SKAT**
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Date: 1/10/2016 7:03:00 PM
I just let my finger fall on a place in your oldies page 5, my lucky number and fell on this splendid poem, it is one of my favorites of yours I think. I just love it.
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Date: 1/27/2013 1:39:00 PM
Thanks for sharing. This is a well thought out poem- The wording pulled me into thought. Thanks. LEGANDWRITER
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Date: 3/20/2012 11:10:00 PM
Harry, congrats once again on your win... i want to thank you for your nice comment..always..pd
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Date: 3/19/2012 11:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Let's Dance" contest Harry. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/18/2012 3:29:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest; I'm happy to re-read this one on the winners' list :-)
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Date: 3/18/2012 1:40:00 AM
Realistic dreams of nuance... wow! now you make me want to dance with you! beautiful piece Harry, good luck on the contest
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Date: 3/18/2012 1:43:00 AM
no need for luck, Congrats is in the order! wonderful :)
Date: 3/17/2012 5:18:00 PM
Well, it's on the list at least. Congratulations, Harry. A special poem!!
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Date: 3/17/2012 2:59:00 PM
breathtakingly soulful, harry… congrats on your win in my contest :) huggs
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Date: 3/17/2012 12:43:00 PM
Very nice Harry. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/17/2012 11:58:00 AM
congrats Harry luv on a super win for this wonderful moon dance .. very expressive lines of superb imagery flows.. happy weekend...
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Date: 3/17/2012 8:36:00 AM
congratulations in the contest with a beautiful dance.
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Date: 3/16/2012 12:50:00 PM
Very nice and romantic Harry...enjoyed...good luck in the contest...thanks for the nice comments...Marty
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Date: 3/16/2012 9:45:00 AM
Oh, such a sweet-romantic piece on "dance". like how you put the word 'clement' there, Good luck Harry, huggs
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Date: 3/15/2012 9:12:00 PM
awesome, it' s a fave of Charma too!!
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Date: 3/15/2012 9:49:00 AM
This poem has the romantic WoW Factor-Just beautiful and going tmf.. the poet too:)-cHARMA
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Date: 3/15/2012 9:42:00 AM
A lovely, romantic entry. Good luck Harry. Thank you for your kind comments on my poetry. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/15/2012 6:20:00 AM
You can tell lots of thoughts of romance went into your write Harry..Its just lovely xxx Hugs
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Date: 3/14/2012 8:56:00 PM
ooh la la. I LOVE this, Harry. Love that word "clement" you come up with such great vocabulary even in a little fun poem like this one.!! YOu know what. Maybe this even works for the "lure" contest!! A FAVE
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Date: 3/14/2012 6:20:00 PM
enjoyed reading your work!! Thanks for reading my nonsense....;)
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Date: 3/14/2012 5:23:00 PM
hey harry, I think this is a delightful entry for the dancing contest, romantic and lovely...thank you for your sweet words on 'finish this verse', I wasn't sure about it so it's encouraging to get some positive feedback! :-)
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