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Moon

Come now moon, Shine your light Let me have some brightness tonight Send me a star that I can borrow And you can have it back tomorrow Come now moon, Watch over me Turn the tides that are drowning me Please take me underneath your wing And turn my winters into spring Come now moon, I know you're there For you always follow me everywhere Please send down just one moonbeam To turn my nightmares into dreams Come now moon, Walk with me With you around I am sure to see A path somewhere that I can take One on which my heart wont break Come now moon, Before the day Creeps in and chases you away Please put the pieces of my soul Back together and make me whole.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/6/2013 7:06:00 PM
Great writing here. I just dropped in and wonder why I haven't visited before... I do like the looks of your work.... Jake
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Date: 5/7/2013 9:37:00 PM
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Date: 4/25/2013 11:50:00 AM
This is really awesome! Simple and Sensitive!
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Date: 4/24/2013 7:41:00 PM
Jennifer, congratulations with the "From here to the moon and back " contest.... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 4/24/2013 7:18:00 PM
I really enjoyed this winning poem. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/24/2013 6:41:00 PM
Very nice lyrics and nice poem. Congrats on your win~A.O
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Date: 4/22/2013 9:22:00 PM
Very nice poem.
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Date: 4/19/2013 2:58:00 PM
Really great poem you have here :) I'm sort of new to poetry soup so if you find time maybe you wouldn't mind checking out some of my own?
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Date: 4/7/2013 5:45:00 PM
Very enjoyable poem. I love the 2nd stanza about the tides...great lines.
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Date: 4/7/2013 12:28:00 PM
Jennifer, this is a lovely poem. Enjoyed~ Thank you for sharing your poem. Have yourself a good one...Linda
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Date: 4/6/2013 9:34:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem with nice flow and rhyme. BG
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Date: 4/6/2013 5:56:00 PM
Jennifer, thank you for your fine "Moon" poem, nice to read. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/6/2013 5:46:00 PM
Very good piece. Really enjoyed your poem.
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