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Moon-clasped Memories

In tender wings of spring, twilight mirrors star-ruffled seas with soft peach sakura wisps, sailing through twirling tulips and dandelion dreamcatchers. There I'll drift amongst primrose blossoms adorning skies with moon-clasped memories.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/8/2024 2:40:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your winner in Tania's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K

Jcb Brul

Date: 3/5/2024 6:58:00 AM

This is so adorable! From line 3 to line 10---you captured vivid imagery that captures the beauty of spring. Congratulations dear Ink.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/4/2024 9:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful Spring write as the "Moon-clasped Memories. Oh yes, Spring will be here soon. A great time of the year... Have a wonderful day/week writing away..........

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/3/2024 12:55:00 PM

Ink, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely poem!

Ink Empress
Date: 3/4/2024 8:42:00 AM

Thank you so very much tania appreciate your support

Paige Hind

Date: 2/20/2024 10:03:00 AM

Gorgeous writing- love the opening first four lines.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 2/20/2024 6:41:00 AM

Simply beautiful. I love this. God bless you always, love, Gina

Valsa George

Date: 2/20/2024 5:15:00 AM

When most of us think conventionally, you always prefer to be different from the run-of-the-mill type with a unique presentation. Beautiful Etheree dear Empress! Sorry, these days, I hardly get time to log into Poetry soup....

Ayesha Iqbal

Date: 2/19/2024 10:05:00 PM

That title itself is so gorgeou dear.. I mean how could you think so poetically! I love it!

Joseph May

Date: 2/19/2024 7:46:00 PM

Wow, this is beautiful Empress, Enjoyed

Bill Baker

Date: 2/19/2024 6:45:00 PM

I tried to pick a favorite line, and I decided on "all of them". I like the energy is your imagery in this one, Inky. It goes on my FAVs list for sure. When we take time to think about them, we have a full range of beautiful memories to choose from. These were a nice group of memories to share through your beautiful poetry, my friend. It was great to be back and get a poem posted today and be able to read my friend's poetry. Love and Light both day and night, Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/19/2024 4:19:00 PM

exquisite poem, dear Ink! Loved the alliterations and the rhythms they created (as well as the imagery) I especially liked 'moon-clasped memories.' Perfect words and title. Your words were soulful and uplifting; I enjoyed the read this evening. hugs and blessings, Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2024 3:37:00 PM

So utterly beautiful. A big fave

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/19/2024 1:25:00 PM

Beautifully poetic in realms of spring. Much enjoyed the exuberance of your poem, Ink. Splendid ending: There I'll drift amongst primrose blossoms adorning skies with moon-clasped memories.

Silent One

Date: 2/19/2024 12:33:00 PM

A lovely spiritual etheree, I feel... you are so good with this from and have created a flowing piece here with your own unique metaphors like dandelion dreamcathers and moon clasped memories... Best of luck in the contest..

Frederic Parker

Date: 2/19/2024 11:42:00 AM

sometimes dear poet, your poetry seems caressed by the Gods...

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/19/2024 10:23:00 AM

Lovely write! You painted upon my mind a perfect portrait of wings, soft fragrance, and spingtime romance. Well done!

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/19/2024 10:14:00 AM

Your profound talent for poetry consistently mesmerizes and ignites the depths of my imagination, dear Ink. Your ethereal words evoke vivid scenes of sheer beauty, weaving together an enchanting tapestry of emotions. Your portrayal of daydreaming, albeit in unconventional hours, is utterly captivating. It is a cherished pastime of mine, and your unique depiction effortlessly blends various elements into a truly sublime experience. BOL with the contest

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/19/2024 10:05:00 AM

Superb imagery in this Etheree. Such lovely poetry induced one to read it again and again.

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/19/2024 8:49:00 AM

Dear Empress, , soulful poetess, your poetic brilliance never fails to captivate and enchant my heart's imagination. Your dreamy verse evokes special moments of imagery and poetic beauty that combine to form an exquisite experience. I especially love "primrose blossoms adorning skies" and "moon-clasped memories". The moon holds a charismatic magic as does your amazing poetry. Your brilliant artistry shines! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/19/2024 8:17:00 AM

A very fine and pleasant description of daydreaming (although not during the day). One of my favorite activities! The way you describe it is a nice mix of things.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/19/2024 6:57:00 AM

This is an enigmatic picture that I can experience through your poem. I sense the soft drifting at twilight. It's very enjoyable to read.

John Lawless

Date: 2/19/2024 6:51:00 AM

Ink, you could call this "Etheree-al" beautifully done

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 2/19/2024 6:46:00 AM

In tender wings of spring.,, u the tender wings of my spring papi!!! star-ruffled seas with soft peach sakura wisps sailing through twirling tulips… mmmmm these imagery papi!!!! Damn u know how to take my breath away!!! adorning skies with moon-clasped memories.… look at u making magic with ur enchanting quill papi!!! Absolutely brilliant write with such elegant architectural weave…

The Aura Rhymes

Date: 2/19/2024 6:42:00 AM

How tender …. Beautifully expressed as always

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/19/2024 6:41:00 AM

Ahhh!! Reads like a good contender to me if for a contest. An ideal place to be to see all this happening. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K