Mood

MOOD the day leaden hangs asleep in depth there is no moment only a dead space just one very long moment with lines and spaces smeared for lack of sun is it an omen a june prediction? at this moment i’m thinking ‘sunny tomorrows’ with clear blue skies will the leaden moment subside? Dave Austin

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2016 9:33:00 PM

Hi, Daver, thanks for the visit today! Have not gotten many reads on my worldly poem and needed someone sweet like you to see it.

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/3/2016 12:55:00 PM

"Sunny tomorrows" are like ribbons and bows, but I've also always enjoyed warm showers with rainbows. We haven't been getting enough rain and the grass is prematurely brown. Hopefully not an omen, you the lack of sun, while here blistering heat. It's only the beginning of summer, there will be many warm and sunny days, though I'm no weather guru.:) Keep well and stay happy, you are dearly loved! Hugs, Mikki

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/2/2016 11:04:00 AM

thinking positive, love the poem.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/1/2016 6:19:00 PM

yes, this is a very dreary day and I hate these times. you really got across that feeling , Daver.