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Monsoon Blessing

--Anacreontic Verse-- Dry heavens build Temple to the North Fluff billows up from Crags to stratosphere Midnight cover Issues forth Engulfs solar orb Cloud King’s dance begins Footfalls fill the sky Grape press of the Gods Now drowns our sins Monsoon rain’s vintage Pours down from high Deep lilac cloudburst, His hands touch plain Land surrenders Its sweet release Breathe floral musk Of desert rain Once parched ground revels Moist in its surcease Light fragrance spiced Sweet pollen with our Kiln-baked sins, the Hint of ancient bones Astringent whiff of Ozone’s bite within Intoxicating Rich organic loam Dry rivers pregnant Rough land transforms To fertile home Soft fragrance Of a harsh world Yet renewed 8/7/16 For contest: Anacreontic Verse 4 Sponsor: Edward Ebbs

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Date: 9/29/2016 9:19:00 PM
wow Tom, all due respect this should've placed higher- amazing write :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 8/8/2016 1:27:00 AM
Thunderous poetry dear, Tom. A glorious seven!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 8/8/2016 6:15:00 AM
Thanks, Demetrios!
Date: 8/7/2016 11:58:00 PM
Simply beautiful! :)
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Tom Quigley
Date: 8/8/2016 6:15:00 AM
Thanks, Arthur!
Date: 8/7/2016 9:37:00 PM
Sounds like a real frog choker! This is great Tom. Publication huh? Wow! Very impressive! The poem especially.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 8/8/2016 6:16:00 AM
"Frog choker"? Ha! Yup. Thanks for reading.

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