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I wrote this while i was unemployed, looking for a job.

Money isn't everything You earn it just to use it Do whatever you want with it Just try not to lose it The more you have The more you spend A simple rule To tell a friend In order to avoid Getting broke You stretch your dollar With so much hope Eat ramon noodles Once too much You pinch a penny While have a lunch Take a walk Instead of a bus Dont wave the cab You'll save a bunch If you save a dollar Put one away everyday You'll have one more At a later date Get paid the same While work for wage In due time any job You can learn to save

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/27/2015 7:04:00 PM
Great, unfortunately it is so true.
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Date: 9/18/2015 5:45:00 PM
Criss, that is true the more we have, the more we spend. Sadly, I like saving spending others. :) Anyways, ramen noodles are a funny food. But cheap as heep... LOL.. I buy them all the time. Not for me, though. You must be from New York, we don't have cabs down here. A great poem, with a good message... LINDA
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