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Want to see the photography collection which inspired this piece?                                                                                                                                                   Go to https://jeanniecronin.picfair.com/


 

The lace of a Lily and grace of a bee the face of a flower and sun on the sea Silhouette shadows cloud painted skies rivers of peace a bird as she flies colorful lichen the succulents glow still water mirrors and Autumn’s first show All of them captured as moments in time life’s truest treasure these moments of mine

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Date: 12/14/2021 2:07:00 PM
Superb imagery and lovely flow with stunning rhyme. Hope all's well Jeannie, be safe and sure always, have a great Christmas, blessings from Scotland, Gordon
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 12/14/2021 8:01:00 PM
Thank you, Gordon. Your comments are always so very kind.
Date: 12/4/2021 11:35:00 AM
I adore poems with short lines. I adore this poem!!
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 12/4/2021 1:38:00 PM
Glad you liked it. If you copy and paste that picfair link you will see most of the photos that inspired the piece. Thanks for the kind words
Date: 12/4/2021 11:35:00 AM
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 12/4/2021 1:35:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, that’s awesome:)
Date: 12/3/2021 10:44:00 AM
You noticed! Well done, indeed! Aloha!
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 12/3/2021 1:02:00 PM
Now if we could just get it to all end on a happy note. Thanks for the comment.

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