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Momentary Blushes

like a blast of fire erupting amidst smoky trails this horizon was momentarily aglow before darkness consumed the skies again nature blushed in small folds as if embarassed by her emotional display of the countless tears she's cried in winter's glum

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/7/2020 10:31:00 AM

So vivid, I can see the lit horizon before night returns, and feel the delicate air - just lovely-

Sandra Adams
Date: 3/8/2020 12:02:00 PM

Thank you so much Michelle... the horizon is one of my favorite things to watch... hugs

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/3/2020 11:41:00 AM

Sandy you speak words of truth which are so worthy - I enjoy your grasping life with both hands and and how you express it in poetic language. Awe inspiring! Great poem Sandy, Blessings my friend. Jennifer.

Sandra Adams
Date: 3/8/2020 12:02:00 PM

Thank you so much Jennifer... hugs

Silent One

Date: 2/29/2020 7:03:00 AM

no one should be embarrassed of another feelings and emotions.. Well written my friend..

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/29/2020 9:42:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend... hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/29/2020 4:36:00 AM

What an amazing poetic writing! Its beauty beyond measure dearest, Sandra! Hugs xxx

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/29/2020 9:41:00 PM

Thank you so much Demetrios... good to see you... hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/28/2020 8:19:00 PM

Nothing beats nature, Sandra, especially the birth of a new day. Tom

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/29/2020 9:39:00 PM

I agree Tom...I love nature... so much beauty contained within it... hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2020 8:03:00 PM

such glorious personification, my friend. Wonderful!

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/29/2020 9:39:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea... hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/28/2020 7:26:00 PM

Yes, even nature is glum! Hopefully we will be dancing upon sunshine soon!

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/29/2020 9:38:00 PM

Thank you Kim... had a momentary glimpse of a sunrise and then snow flurries off and on the last two days... here's hoping for spring... hugs

Chris Green

Date: 2/28/2020 4:25:00 PM

Damn, this was gorgeous. I could see this and I could feel it as if I were there. Your relationship with nature and emotions is our gift because it shine in your poetry. I don't even know what else to say, this was beautiful.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/28/2020 6:42:00 PM

wow thank you Chris... glad you got a glimpse of my sunrise this morning...I was exited to see it, even if it only lasted a few short moments... hugs

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/28/2020 4:11:00 PM

Wonderfully metaphoric and exquisitely executed Sandra.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/28/2020 6:41:00 PM

Thank you so much Caren... hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/28/2020 4:05:00 PM

Poem beautifully aglow, Sandy--lovely metaphor!

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/28/2020 6:41:00 PM

Thank you so much Vijay...it was pretty...I can't wait until I get a glimpse of the next one, being they are among my favorite things to see... hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/28/2020 2:37:00 PM

- Oh ... so beautifully described, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/28/2020 6:39:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise...it looked like a fire through the trees and though the rise only was in the sky a few short moments it was nice to see the colorful display... hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/28/2020 1:39:00 PM

WoW! Sandra, This is gorgeous. I enjoyed how you used nature to express emotion. I liked what I saw. Well done talented poetess. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/28/2020 6:38:00 PM

Thank you so much Alexis... what a kind thing to say... this was the first rise I have seen even if momentary in months it seems...it's always cloudy or rainy as the sun is rising or setting, so we haven't gotten to enjoy much beauty... have a great weekend my friend... hugs