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Mom (Part I)

So sad because, I went to see my mom again, Again 2 hours long Darn this driving sucks. I hate to drive so much, But yet i sacrificed, Just because she is my mom, Got home, my dad calls Told my mom to hold on, He called from other side of The world I told my mom, I walked to my yard, Saw my step-dad told him To hold on, Didn't mint to be mean, He called from the other Side of the world, I missed my dad so much, I wish I could go back for a visit along. Tears dropped on my cheeks along. Mom didn't understand why, I hanged up, Went to say Hi to mom, She got the knife in her hand Was cooking something along, Told her to put away the knife, When she put the knife down It almost hit her by an inch. She yelled at me, I walked away and told her thanks mom, She came back to my room, Told me give me hug, she squished me so tight, Darn my back hurts so much Its been 3 weeks, And 3 days for headache along. I screamed the pain was killing so much, She got mad again and walk off. She told me to take pills for being so depressed. O God, not again mom.

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Date: 5/12/2009 8:28:00 AM
I like reading your poems. This one is an enjoyable to read. Ernilando
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Date: 5/4/2009 7:41:00 AM
nice its long
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