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Misunderstood

Hear the silent way It is those dark fears you hide A slow way to breath Silence is holy The judgment spoken aptly No more endless words Words that bury you With wary, meaningless time To some, no replies Speak always knowing words are golden coins to save spend them shamelessly Hear that which only Has greater meaning for you Listen closely now.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/28/2015 7:30:00 AM
Hi Julie: Great Prose: Congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/28/2015 12:22:00 AM
Wonderful string iof senryus julie! Congrats on ur top podium!
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Date: 7/24/2015 10:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your top of the class win! Excellent Senryu! Pandita
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Date: 7/24/2015 7:37:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/24/2015 4:46:00 PM
Wonderful win. SKAT
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Date: 7/24/2015 4:28:00 PM
Love ... the wisdom of your words, penned so beautifully. I very much enjoyed the moment with your piece. Congratulations!!
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Date: 7/24/2015 11:10:00 AM
A powerful poem with wisdom a seven. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Julie Heckman
Date: 7/24/2015 2:42:00 PM
thanks much Eve
Date: 7/24/2015 9:20:00 AM
Awesome win, Julie! Last verse my favorite. Congrats, hugs! :-)
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Julie Heckman
Date: 7/24/2015 2:42:00 PM
Glad you liked it Kim
Date: 7/24/2015 8:16:00 AM
a very thought provoking write - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Julie Heckman
Date: 7/24/2015 2:43:00 PM
Hugs to you Jan
Date: 7/24/2015 7:58:00 AM
Love it! Congrats on your win, Julie. xoxo
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Julie Heckman
Date: 7/24/2015 2:44:00 PM
thank you Lycia
Date: 7/24/2015 7:40:00 AM
You got mind Julie! Best win!!!!Congratz!
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Julie Heckman
Date: 7/24/2015 2:45:00 PM
Thank you Marvin
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 7/24/2015 7:40:00 AM
You got my mind Julie!
Date: 7/20/2015 11:32:00 AM
A majestic piece laced with unalloyed wisdom. 7+!
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Julie Heckman
Date: 7/20/2015 12:58:00 PM
thank you Hannington what a great first name...:-)

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