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Misty Moment of Lost Love

"Misty Moment of Lost Love" flame fades vintage dreams dwell buried embers pierced pieces stain soiled earth misty moment of lost love veils smoked ash. ~~~ spurned heart immersed in glow splintered veins cry wooden tomb smothers breath misty moment of lost love death's cavern. ~~~ *For Black-Eyed Susan's Any Poem under 20 lines Contest. *Oct. 27, 2012.

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Skat A

Date: 3/13/2014 3:13:00 AM

deep poem... ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/15/2012 2:31:00 PM

so cold sweetie and very sad! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/15/2012 7:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's "Poem Not Entered in a contest" Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2012 4:37:00 PM

Congratulations, LInda on your win with this one. I remember it!

Len Gasun

Date: 11/13/2012 8:17:00 AM

Many congratulations on your awesome win my dear friend, Linda-M! love/hugs, LG

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/13/2012 12:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Linda, well done xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/12/2012 4:44:00 PM

Linda my bff, congratulations in Susan's contest... xox~pd

Joseph May

Date: 11/12/2012 4:30:00 PM

congrats on your win with this poignant write Linda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/12/2012 12:20:00 PM

WON 4TH PLACE .. THANKXX

Tim Ryerson

Date: 11/12/2012 12:13:00 PM

Wow Linda Marie...beautiful and intense!...congrats on the win...The Saints look like they're coming around and the Giants seem to be in their usual mid-season slump...not to worry... they do this every year they win the Super Bowl - Tim

Kash Poet

Date: 11/12/2012 8:13:00 AM

Love it Linda!Congrats on the win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/11/2012 5:04:00 PM

this was very good, Linda, glad to see you on the winners list . Congrats!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/11/2012 10:56:00 AM

Hello Linda my bff...., CONGRATULATIONS, in Nette's "VIEWS FROM A VIGNETTE" contest.. Keep up the good work... always~ PD

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/9/2012 7:40:00 PM

WON 5TH PLACE ..THANKXXX.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/9/2012 5:41:00 PM

Very expressive work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Congrats on your great win...Sara

Tanya Harrington

Date: 11/9/2012 12:45:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this strong, vivid creation. Beautiful write of such sorrow. :) Tanya

Kash Poet

Date: 11/9/2012 10:19:00 AM

Another beautiful verse from you Linda.Congrats on the win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/9/2012 8:05:00 AM

Another superb win, congratulations Linda xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/9/2012 7:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the Vignette contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol No snow here ...it is warming here. Hope you all have relief soon. Our prayers are with you.

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 11/2/2012 1:45:00 PM

Ah, lovely!...Deep! Cynthia

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/31/2012 8:44:00 AM

An outstanding write on this wonderful poem . Hope all is fine and that you weathered the storm okay. It looked terrible. love phyl

Ronny Madonsela

Date: 10/30/2012 6:42:00 AM

VERY POWERFUL POEM, YET WRITTEN WITH SUCH GRACE. I WAS WOWED I LOVE THIS. *SMILES* RON

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 10/29/2012 3:43:00 AM

‡ You Know You Know When You Truly Love A Poet, Sweet Precious Beautiful Linda Marie, When Their Words Float Slowly Afore Your Eyes. When You Feel Them, 'Deep Inside.' The Senses Reaching Feeling Absorbing, Touching,, Loving. Tis When One Knows They Have Beheld, The Rarest In Beautiful Treasures. All Of The Above, And Sooo Much More, Apply Unto Your Beautiful Self. The Sight Of You, Your Voice, Your Heart, Everything, Is A Beacons Lighthouse Beckoning. Raging Waters, Inside. My Love, Rachel *

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/28/2012 11:13:00 PM

passing through ans saw this , sweets!.. thanks; we need 2 stanzas... go and add!..:) huggs and love

Nette Onclaud
Date: 10/28/2012 11:15:00 PM

congrats on your recent wins... yes!

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 10/28/2012 8:05:00 PM

A rocking entry for the contest, luv!! Jag