Misjudged

with beams in his eyes he points at the speck in mine - I keep my peace *inspired by Matthew 7:5 23 July 2015 Senryu of Being Misjudged Contest Sponsor: Marvin Celestial

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Eric Boddie

Date: 8/4/2015 3:33:00 PM

eyes never lie....even though the mouth will try....and cause the windows to cry....because the truth is something to never deny....;)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 7/28/2015 7:34:00 AM

Hi Kim: Congrats on your win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/28/2015 12:24:00 AM

Silence is the best tool to express many a times Kim! Fine work n win!Congrats!

Paul Callus

Date: 7/26/2015 4:55:00 PM

Very wise of you, Kim ~ Sometimes silence is golden. With some people you just can't reason! Congratulations. Hugs // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/25/2015 8:31:00 AM

It is so true, people who are judgemental do seem to be blinded to their own shortcomings.

Justin Bordner

Date: 7/25/2015 2:34:00 AM

To be misjudged is common, to be true to your natural beauty is essential Kim...your beauty is real...J.A.B.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2015 11:16:00 PM

wow, this is AMAZING. I love it. Congrats!!! Mine were not even real senryu, most of them.

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/24/2015 10:42:00 PM

Kim, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your win:-)Alexis

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/24/2015 10:03:00 PM

It's beautiful and full of wisdom! Congratulations, Kim on a wonderful well-deserved win! Pandita

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/24/2015 7:38:00 PM

A lot left in the readers mind as it should be ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Constance La France

Date: 7/24/2015 5:14:00 PM

Kim, beautifully penned 7 and congratulations on your placement in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, let me tell you ...

Skat A

Date: 7/24/2015 4:48:00 PM

Awesome win KIm

Julia Ward

Date: 7/24/2015 11:18:00 AM

A point well-made in verse, Kim. Congratulations!

Eve Roper

Date: 7/24/2015 11:14:00 AM

Love the impact in this verse congratulations on your win a seven hugs Eve

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/24/2015 9:40:00 AM

Your write swims smoothly in the heart of the readers, a brilliant penned here and congrat. On your win............A.M.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/24/2015 8:17:00 AM

Very good advice Kim - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Lycia Harding

Date: 7/24/2015 8:11:00 AM

Awesome Senryu, SpeckleEye... Uh, I mean, KIM. Ha! Congrats on your excellent win. xoxo

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/24/2015 7:54:00 AM

This is an awesome write Kim :) I love it! especially your last line.. Hope your weekend will be a peaceful one :) hugs Wilma

Marvin G. Celestial

Date: 7/24/2015 7:42:00 AM

Great win Kim! Congratz!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/24/2015 6:23:00 AM

I love this senryu inspired by a very intriguing bible verse. Great work! Always, Laura

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/23/2015 10:31:00 PM

Kim, I have such situations... I can relate to your senryu!!! this one of my bets in this contest.. ~Olive Eloisa =') Go Pinay!!!

Skat A

Date: 7/23/2015 7:10:00 PM

This is a very lovely senryu. Kim, you keep your thoughts well. hope you win big with this one. Love SKAT

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/23/2015 4:14:00 PM

Good one that is Biblically based work..I enjoyed reading it..One Bible translate it as how can you get a tooth pick out of your brother's eye when you have a telephone pole in your eye?.Reads like a winner to me...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/23/2015 1:45:00 PM

Excellently written and inspiring dear, Kim. If only all men and women could listen to this divine advice then we all could follow what he says at Matthew 5:48. where he calls us to be perfect as our father in heaven is perfect! God bless you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/23/2015 12:29:00 PM

- A good advice to many of us - well and wisely written, dear Kim - Luck in contest!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)