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Miracle On 10th Street

On many long, drawn out nights, his routine was to shuffle aimlessly along dimly lit city streets. Much of the time, his only companion was a concealed remnant of cheap bottled wine. He scavenged for food and money. He would walk enveloped in deep, weighty shadows and halo laden street lights. Solitary. Lonely. Emptiness that few people feel or know. The raw hollow of an alcoholics tightly drawn stomach. A gnawing pain that craves food but will only be quelled when he gets enough cash for another pint of cheap wine or gin. Where to spend the night? Maybe with some of them under the 10th st. bridge. They may have some money there, or a blanket to share. Might rummage garbage containers at the restaurants on the way. Could walk the parking lot at the grocery store. There's always change lying on the asphalt. Could act like he passed out on a city bench. The police take you to the Detox Center then. He hated that. Have to stay 72 hours. Guts ache, skin crawls. They feed you well, but there is always that craving. Just keep walking. Frail, vaguely awaren of hissurroundings as he treks in shadow andsepia. On 10th, the street lights are so damned bright they hurt his eyes. What's that at the bus stop bench in a brown paper sack? Two loaves of bread, two wrappers of bologna, and a luxurious bottle of Gallo wine tucked in the sack. My God. Providence at a city bus stop. Someone boarded the bus and left their supper. Probably headed for the homeless shelter overnight. White bread and meat for one hunger. Cheap wine for the other. There might even be some food to share. Miracle on 10th St.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/29/2015 4:29:00 PM
You portrayed this splendidly Brian, it was if I was there watching...a7
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Brian Baumgarn
Date: 8/13/2015 5:55:00 AM
I need to pay closer attention to my spelling. Should read "I still see" and later "have a good day" rather than have a goo day, LOL
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Brian Baumgarn
Date: 7/30/2015 12:15:00 AM
Thanks so much, Tim. I have been in recovery for over 30 years and I still this lonely scenario played out in the city I live in. It was just some thoughts I had regarding gratitude and prayers for those still suffering. Thanks, again and have a goo done.
Date: 7/27/2015 11:00:00 PM
Sadly, Brian, this scene plays out every second of the day, but not always witha temporary happy ending. Great write, gritty stuff. Regards, Viv
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Brian Baumgarn
Date: 7/27/2015 11:12:00 PM
Yes, Viv, all over the world on too many street corners. I have over thirty years of sobriety but I see people who are losing the battle all the time. I wanted to touch on how the mind works when all we can really focus on is the next drunk, hit, or high is going to being found. Thanks, so much for reading it.
Date: 7/24/2015 6:30:00 AM
This brings out a fiercely alive combination of thought, feeling, emotion of an alcoholic's life..awesome write.
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Date: 7/27/2015 11:14:00 PM
Thanks, so much, Josefina. Yes, this is pattern when we start to lose the battle with addiction. I have over thirty years sober and I worked in a treatment center. I wish there was a magic way to make everyone better! I really appreciate your reading the poem;.

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