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Minutes We Spent

Days, weeks, years, many hours included Minutes we spent above, now saddened, deluded Moments shared, in private, continual we Deceived be, looking past I see From the day we first met Attraction, absorbed through music shared Revealing the hurts of our past Captured, our hearts now care Days, weeks, in trance The unbalance our lives created Minutes we spent above Meeting in Glasgow our lives related To the Island you had to go back This reality you always said You knew you were going back home Knowing our reality was dead Weeks and months passed by Always knowing I was by your side Monetary problems caused a rift I helped in my wanting stride Then came the day The day I travelled to you You asked so many times This feeling of feeling true At Arricife we met Having told me your with someone else For the weeks, months, years that passed by I was discarded, left on a shelf But on that Thursday, in the apartment we We released what had happened before Tears, cuddles That had captured the Glasgow, thee Then that call on the Friday morning Because of the history between You were barred from interacting This two who loved so keen Sound asleep early Monday morning 3.15am, when it again began Upset, wanting to see me Desiring two, to become lovingly one Moments once again were shared In depth, and loving sighs Making love for hours and hours Amidst our saddened cries We awoke later that day An agenda of life your to meet Now cancelled, Kissing, cuddling, you desire we greet We spent this Monday in bed Talking, kissing, about many things Wishing that we were to be And what our future would bring But you had already chosen On the week that I was due out to fly For these days, weeks, months I've wasted on you For your tomorrows, you'll internally cry Goodbye. <*>

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Date: 5/23/2014 10:19:00 AM
Hi James, Nice to meet you. This was a masterpiece, I didn't want to come to an end. I'm sad for you, I hope the days are kinder. Wonderfully expressed write. Thank you for sharing this with us. Love and Peace, Deborah
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Date: 5/23/2014 12:20:00 AM
In this life sometimes we need choose but we hope for a happy ending. This is really touching. Reality bites. Though sad ending cannot be avoided but your works give something to think about.
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James Fraser
Date: 5/23/2014 12:11:00 PM
Than you Lena :)
Date: 2/28/2014 10:55:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant. Thanks for making my day. I have found it pleasurable to always begin the weekend with Poetrysoup because poets like you and poems like this do not disappoint. Have a lovely weekend
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James Fraser
Date: 5/23/2014 12:10:00 PM
It's a pleasure Funom :)
Date: 12/23/2013 1:53:00 PM
A very sad work..Enjoyed reading this one today..It had a suspense about it that drew me in..Thanks for the visit to my page..I was delighted that you dropped by..Sara
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James Fraser
Date: 5/23/2014 12:11:00 PM
It was a joy to visit your poetry Sara :)

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