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The twinkle of a star Like a sparkle in her eye Both bring me over the moon But only one of them is mine A sunrise over water Like her smile sipping wine Both bring me peace and wonder But only one of them is mine The song of early birds Like her laughter's chime Both make me sing along But only one of them is mine The soft passing of a breeze Like her skins caress divine Both bring me soothing chills But only one of them is mine The world so full of beauty Which she captures more sublime Both of them my world But only one of them is mine May 2010 This one actually has a second part to it, but um, I haven't even written it yet, who knows if I will get to it. But yeah, you probably wouldn't think of it but my intention was to write this for the "Dark Poet" contest. Hmm.

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Date: 8/10/2010 3:12:00 PM
good write stay cautious and careful to remember the dog with 2 bones
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Date: 6/15/2010 6:09:00 PM
so charming....smile!
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Date: 6/12/2010 4:09:00 AM
Very well written..love the flow
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Date: 6/11/2010 5:38:00 PM
Um.....This is real Good Destiny...even without part two.....Awesome Write.....Larry
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Date: 6/11/2010 4:46:00 PM
loved it, enjoyed your write...P.D.
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