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Minced Words Hello , what a nice day ,It seems perfect in every way. The clear blue sky with those popcorn clouds is something to celebrate. And the view of the valley is quite amazing really, the stream,the grass,and the trees. And the air is so crisp and fresh ,it smells so good to me. Being here makes me want to stay and take this all in. Oh, I'm sorry, what's your name again? 6/17/16

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Date: 6/17/2016 9:45:00 PM
Hi Jack E, an awesome rant. Skat
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Jack Eldridge
Date: 6/18/2016 3:15:00 AM
Thank you Skat.
Date: 6/17/2016 7:14:00 PM
Er, Jack, you seem a little distracted…just kidding, nice nature poem!:)
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Jack Eldridge
Date: 6/17/2016 8:28:00 PM
Thank you Er Your name again? Haha

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