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Midnight Verse-Introducing: Red Fiery and Poet Destroyer

The raven sky colored with white clouds lifted its veil Patiently waiting for its radiance to reveal I watch these stars while you bathe in the sun Our two world's apart, still the sky is one The sunlight touches my warm feet, While the gentle breeze embraces your heart beat Stardust and Nightingales paint the sky worldwide As the sun turns in, now it's my time to hide Tonight I embrace the same stars you slept with Dreaming while you savor the sun made myth This night I tuck my nightmares under my pillow, Bathed by the stars, you romanced with your glow Thank you so much Poet Destroyer for collaborating with me...Hugs Red

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Date: 5/17/2016 10:00:00 AM
What a wonderful collaboration! Very lovely imagery. :)
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Date: 3/30/2016 7:03:00 PM
Hello Red, stopping by to say hi. :) enjoying our collaboration once again. LINDA
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/14/2016 9:40:00 AM
You are awesome Linda :)
Date: 3/27/2016 9:14:00 AM
A clear example of two extremely talented poets created a masterpiece. Adding this jewel to my fav list.. You two weaved a tapestry that delights the reader!
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/14/2016 9:41:00 AM
Thanx Robert ! I appreciate your visits...:)
Date: 3/22/2016 11:10:00 AM
Good morning Red. Hugs Rick.
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/14/2016 9:42:00 AM
Hugs
Date: 3/20/2016 2:02:00 PM
This is fantastic, Red Fiery. One thing about PD. She is SO GOOD at taking another person's poetry and matching it in flavor! I don't even know which part is hers and which part is yours. That is the sign of a really nice collab. YES!
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/14/2016 9:43:00 AM
Dear Andrea, you are a fantastic writer ...thank you for supporting my work too..:)
Date: 3/20/2016 1:47:00 PM
stuning collab from you and PD... such lilting flow, ohh!..huggs
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/14/2016 9:44:00 AM
thank you Nette...:) I appreciate your support and ur visits...xxx
Date: 3/20/2016 7:43:00 AM
Hi Red: Beautiful collaboration! Thank you for your comment my poem.
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Date: 3/20/2016 12:43:00 AM
"Dreaming while you savor the sun made myth" how deliciously poetic, Red. I'm loving the marriage of dark and light ... the physical distance being no match for the emotional connection, between you and your love. And oh ... tucking your nightmares under your pillow. That's a sweet visual. You two worked very well together!
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/20/2016 1:48:00 AM
Thank you so much Timothy... ;)
Date: 3/19/2016 10:27:00 PM
Very nice collaboration. The stars definitely aligned :
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/14/2016 9:44:00 AM
Thank you Tim:) I like ur love poems tooo...:)
Date: 3/19/2016 8:40:00 PM
Red, you both did an amazing job writing this poem, it is hard to tell who is who, it flows so well together, well done you two, 7~
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/14/2016 9:46:00 AM
Thank you Broken wings..) You lifeted my soul with some of your poems...I really mean it !
Date: 3/19/2016 7:25:00 PM
You both wrote magnificent lines!
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/14/2016 9:46:00 AM
Thank you dear...:)
Date: 3/19/2016 1:16:00 PM
Dear Red A wonderful collaborating with the two of you, a perfect match fullfilled in line and verse, great job ladies with such excellent imagery left behind in the minds of your readers, awesomely inspirational, cheri dunn and thanks for the review of my piece also glad you liked it so much, cheri
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/14/2016 9:48:00 AM
Thank u Cherl...:)
Date: 3/19/2016 10:37:00 AM
Some great imagery produced there, and your two styles compliment each other admirably.
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/14/2016 9:49:00 AM
Thank you Johny Boy...:) How did you celebrate your birthday?
Date: 3/19/2016 9:50:00 AM
I read elsewhere about this co-write which was in the making, Red, and I've been watching out for it. I love how you two interact world's apart; distance is no deterrent! The opening and closing lines wrap the contents beautifully! Well done!! ~ hugs // paul
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/14/2016 9:47:00 AM
Thank you dearest...ur poems are a delight...:)
Date: 3/19/2016 9:36:00 AM
I'm glad and had the honors in writing with you, much please to enjoy the same stars. Red Fiery, you did amazingly with connecting the stars... like you said, AS ONE.... Enjoyed... a 7 and favorite. Love Linda
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/19/2016 7:25:00 PM
Well done Linda.

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