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Midnight Feathers

~Midnight Feathers~ * plume after plume stuck in my heart your eyes, deep as dark morning lust goosebumps in the afternoon midnight smoke plume after plume plucked from my heart together we feather -----------------apart **SKAT** FreeStylin-KU

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/7/2019 2:09:00 PM

Cool write, Skat.

Trisha Romano

Date: 5/4/2017 6:34:00 PM

Great imagery! Favorite line: "goosebumps in the afternoon, midnight smoke"

Danka Sikorska

Date: 9/12/2016 12:45:00 PM

I like the picture you presented with that poem. It's very clear and charismatic.

Sarban Bhattacharya

Date: 9/7/2016 12:59:00 PM

Really epigrammatic love poem in form of Haiku.

Fm Rt

Date: 8/18/2016 4:31:00 AM

They're amazing, SKAT A! I really like your poems :) :)

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 8/3/2016 6:40:00 AM

Excellent metaphor to describe passion, SKAT:

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/25/2016 5:42:00 PM

These haiku are a treat! ; ) I am hope you become inspired to write more.

Michael East

Date: 7/17/2016 11:17:00 AM

I like your short poems SKAT A, it is hard to write a short poem I think.

Louis Borgo

Date: 7/2/2016 1:40:00 PM

Very interesting poem, Louis.

Cynthia Ferguson

Date: 6/3/2016 5:05:00 AM

very pretty :)

Cheryl Koko Koomoa

Date: 5/30/2016 12:15:00 PM

Nice set of haiku ! Thanks for your welcome here. Aloha, Cheryl

Femi Adebayo

Date: 4/26/2016 10:26:00 AM

Awesome piece!

Bhavna Khemlani

Date: 4/21/2016 4:46:00 AM

Midnight Feathers is a heartfelt write up ??

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/8/2016 10:03:00 PM

Wonderful write.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2016 8:56:00 PM

Hello there, midnight feathers!! Nice seeing these again and to wish you a happy good night!! (thanks for putting up your contest results!!)

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/25/2016 7:26:00 PM

I love it! So well done, especially your third piece, and the second... oh hell, and the first!!! COOL! Best wishes, Keith

Judith Palmer

Date: 1/19/2016 11:08:00 PM

Great imagery Thank you

Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 1/6/2016 1:01:00 PM

Your sharing never fails to render me more humble, not knowing gems of the art as you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2016 3:26:00 PM

Rereading this one. It's fun to read haiku! Thanks for taking time to see my poem, sweet friend.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/3/2016 1:55:00 PM

Once again i did forget to leave the rating, that's it done now. This Haiku finds its way into my faves,

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/3/2016 1:53:00 PM

Hi Skat, well that is the Ku is it not, one can stay traditional or do ones own way. So it should always be in poetry. Personally i really like this one, it reads well. I like your freestyle....Vladislav. A definite seven skat.