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Microexplorers Scaling An Egg

The glacial slope is tall, a vast and perilous globe It has been a whiteout for nearly three days now We do all we can with our equipment to maintain our footing The surface is so uncertain, but the summit is within reach 5 am, Thursday (?), We are awakened by an earthquake An intolerably loud crack, perhaps a large chunk of opaque ice falling into the sea Some sort of strange eclipse now, a great silver moon appears overhead And now---now a wall of molten yellow magma approaches us! I must stop writing and seek shelter, pray for us small men!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/20/2012 11:46:00 AM
LOL! LOL! Great idea and presentation of a winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 6/22/2012 9:36:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! Very sweet. And thanks to everyone else for all the comments! XOXO
Date: 6/20/2012 11:22:00 AM
clever stuff and it is exactly the sort of bizarre scenario I like.....well done ..... best wishes
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Date: 6/19/2012 7:17:00 AM
Congrats on your win..this is very clever...BG
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Date: 6/19/2012 1:40:00 AM
Jeremy congrats on your win...David
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Date: 6/18/2012 3:02:00 PM
An exciting take on the egg theme. congratulations Jeremy. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/18/2012 2:00:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Jeremy! An excellent and interesting write!! Love, Rhonda
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Date: 6/18/2012 1:51:00 PM
Well done unusual poem. Congratulations.
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Date: 6/18/2012 1:47:00 PM
How great is this [nice to meet YOU..if I might suggest to you a read Robert Forward's Starquake] Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/18/2012 11:15:00 AM
Thanks for your egg poem - YOU won a prize!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/18/2012 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Eggs" contest Jeremy. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/11/2012 4:51:00 AM
...lol... good Jeremy!!!! - Wish you luck in egg contest - Hope you are well..... - oxox Anne-Lise
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 6/11/2012 4:58:00 AM
Thank you, Anne Lise :]

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