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Mental Illness

Do you seem to hear the voices When there is no one else speaking Do they ask you to make choices That will sometimes have you freaking When there is no one else speaking Do words still seem to flood your mind That will sometimes have you freaking Which makes you seem to some unkind Do words still seem to flood your mind That makes your life seem so unfair Which makes you seem to some unkind This life you have you cannot share That makes your life seem so unfair Because you have this mental pain This life you have you cannot share That makes your living seem a bane Because you have this mental pain Do they ask you to make choices That makes your living seem a bane Do you seem to hear the voices

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Date: 8/17/2015 3:31:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your pantoum..They are not so easy to write..Great topic that you have chosen..Sara
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Charles Reese
Date: 8/17/2015 8:49:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I find this style easy though as half the poem writes itself. The only hard part is deciding when to end it.
Date: 8/9/2015 4:16:00 PM
Cool format on this one, Charles. Me lykee!
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Charles Reese
Date: 8/9/2015 7:46:00 PM
I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

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