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1966 I was just 10 years old when Dad said I was ready for the Men Only Swim Hour at the YMCA Downtown where we were members. He had rehearsed proper etiquette with me many times and I was ready, 'Behave as if you are the only one in the pool, greet other men, and go about your business, swim laps' I always most enjoyed the first few moments upon entering the pool area, the heavy, humid air brushing my freedom, a powerful, strangely omnipotent sensation, like this feeling was the natural order for a secret society of male rulers, inviting me into their kingdom to experience truth, if only for an hour. We were all equally noble, wizened and wrinkled sages, lithe and muscled herculeans (my Dad among these) and me...all here just to freely wet the whistle, for an hour.

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Date: 12/8/2016 12:43:00 PM
I like your idea of the special moment. Hemingway liked to do this too. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 12/9/2016 8:50:00 AM
Thanks Daver! I had trepidations literally baring myself...but always...i choose to speak honestly from my heart...and let the towel fall...good to hear from you...am a big fan! your friend, jim
Date: 10/22/2016 5:19:00 PM
I love the fact you were on an equal footing with all the others in the pool - great memories and i especially love the final stanza:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/7/2016 6:56:00 AM
To wet your whistle for me means to drink alcohol. Is this a story about swimming at the YMCA, or a swim through in the pub? Either way I enjoyed the read.
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 10/7/2016 8:44:00 PM
Yes! Swim thru the local pub! good observation Scott! jimbo
Date: 10/5/2016 6:58:00 PM
Jim, I don't remember the YMCA, until i was 20. Everything is different now. I am grateful to read your words today, makes me realize what the world is missing... enjoyed. LINDA
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Date: 9/27/2016 9:39:00 AM
A great poem about you and your Dad.
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Date: 9/27/2016 7:17:00 AM
Outstanding, delightful read! Brought back found memory of Troop 300 (Scouts), and how the Elks allowed us to use their pool one night a week. Great fun!
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Date: 9/26/2016 7:21:00 PM
i enjoyed reading this poem
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Date: 9/25/2016 7:47:00 AM
jimbo, love the development of your story--dad-child bonding!.. is there a part 2?... dive in!...huggs
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