Memory Lane

Strolling down the memory lane, Mirages do not seem so strange. Trails of nostalgia stay engraved, In the happiness I once embraced.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2012 9:24:00 AM

Wonderful memories!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/24/2012 7:13:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Haden. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol 06/24/2012

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 6/24/2012 6:16:00 AM

It has been a pleasure to read such a wonderful poem!! Lori

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 6/24/2012 5:49:00 AM

I love the flow of this poem here..and how each line coordinates with the next to make it understandable..I really love the imagery here...as if you're home, looking at a dusty picture frame or something and wiping it off as you reminiscence with whom that's no longer in your life...anyway..sorry for the long comment..I got carried away...beautifully written poem Haden!! Regards..INK-U-SCRIPT

Haden Chua

Date: 6/24/2012 3:54:00 AM

Josie, your comment is absolutely spot-on.

Josie Whitehead

Date: 6/24/2012 3:10:00 AM

Yes, i also find this when I look through my old photo albums. The nostalgia of the day is still there, but all too often the people I shared my time with on that day have gone and I miss them so much. Memory Lane can be a sad place to walk.