Memories

Eyes of blue with hair of gold Lips blood red with cheeks flushed pink Small shell like delicate ears Memories remain Soft skin white as ivory Neck delicate so swan like Alabaster breasts rose tipped Memories remain Our hearts join in harmony Passions raise bodies held close Loves fever rise, lips touch Memories remain Pleasures exquisite unfold Mind, body, soul enraptured Souls linked as two become one Memories remain Spent in loves delights we lay Caresses gently exchanged our lips touch in sweet union Memories remain complete dodoitsu string "memories" 13/02/2015

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/16/2015 9:49:00 AM

WHAT a memory. one that you cannot forget.

Shane Cooper
Date: 2/16/2015 9:35:00 PM

Hi Andrea, it is nice of you to drop in for a visit. These Dodoitsu just flowed straight out of my pen, I could not write fast enough to keep up with my mind. Doesn't happen like that very often for me. I tend to plod, Ask Jan and Mary Jo. Only problem is I have not been able to write anything since this! That's life I suppose. love Shane XXX

Angie Thomas

Date: 2/15/2015 3:09:00 AM

Very sweet poem, and heartfelt too.

Shane Cooper
Date: 2/15/2015 1:27:00 PM

Thank you Angie, It was a poem that just flowed out of my pen, i so enjoyed writing it. love Shane xxx

Janet Eaton

Date: 2/14/2015 8:31:00 PM

So much passion in this poem. I love it. Janet

Shane Cooper
Date: 2/15/2015 2:48:00 AM

Thank you Janet. Unlike most things that I pen this wrote itself, I think that I owe a huge debt of gratitude to Mary Jo who helped me find my muse again. Love Shane

Constance La France

Date: 2/14/2015 8:59:00 AM

Shane, veeeery sexy and romantic, perfect in every way and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~

Shane Cooper
Date: 2/14/2015 9:54:00 AM

Thank you. Your poetry is magnificent, you show your heart and soul in all you write. Love Shane xxx

Eve Roper

Date: 2/14/2015 8:48:00 AM

A beautiful poem, Shane, tenderness and love memories are made. 7 Blessings and Happy Valentine’s Day Eve

Shane Cooper
Date: 2/14/2015 9:59:00 AM

Thank you Eve and happy Valentine's Day to you also. Love Shane

Tim Smith

Date: 2/13/2015 9:55:00 AM

Very passionate my friend...flows well from one to the next

Shane Cooper
Date: 2/14/2015 9:46:00 AM

Thanks Tim. I did enjoy writing this piece.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/13/2015 6:40:00 AM

oohhh err Shane - great imagery my friend in this fab string of poems:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shane Cooper
Date: 2/13/2015 4:17:00 PM

Thank Nija Naj, this one just flowed from my heart. It is still Incomplete though. There is another half to go but not now. How are your mum and dad. Is your sister behaving? Love Shane xxx