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Memories ----Part 1

Eyes of blue with hair of gold Lips blood red with cheeks flushed pink Small shell like delicate ears Memories remain First Dodoitsu "memories" 11/02/2015

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/16/2015 9:48:00 AM

a truly beautiful memory she is.

Constance La France

Date: 2/14/2015 8:56:00 AM

Shane, beautiful words so well penned now I am going to the next part of the poem ~~

Tim Smith

Date: 2/11/2015 2:20:00 PM

Could be the start of something great...love the imagery.

Shane Cooper
Date: 2/11/2015 2:50:00 PM

Hi Tim, I hope so! the words came together so easily I am looking forward to seeing the work grow. thanks for dropping in Love Shane

Jan Allison

Date: 2/11/2015 9:44:00 AM

Beautiful imagery in this delightful dodoitsu - glad to see ink back in your pen - may it never run dry:-) hugs Jan xx

Shane Cooper
Date: 2/11/2015 1:45:00 PM

My little Ninja Naj thanks to you and my wonderful barefoot country gal. Such inspiration Mary Jo gave me when we wrote together and the word play in comments around your poem yesterday, brought back so many memories of good times when i was young. Could not help but write. Thanks to you both you are the best of friends that a person could hope for. love Shane xxx

Shane Cooper

Date: 2/11/2015 6:29:00 AM

Thank you Mary Jo. I had lost my way with my writing but seeing how you can create such vibrant sensual images it inspired me. This is the result. All my love and thanks. Shane xxx

Janet Eaton

Date: 2/11/2015 5:52:00 AM

I love the description you have painted here. Great pen Shane

Shane Cooper
Date: 2/11/2015 6:10:00 AM

Thank you Janet, I have had a hiatus over me for the last few week and not been able to write solo. A poem that I have just posted today was a collaboration with Mary Jo Hoose, this seems to have brought me back again. Thanks again for your kind words Love Shane xxx