Home » Poems » Mario De Paz » Memorable Vacations

Memorable Vacations

We were together On sandy beach Sweet wind caressing My hair with sun. One month it lasted With sound of sea And our kisses Shiny delight. One month of love Which still now lasts Deeply in my mind With sound of sea and our kisses Shiny delight. 5/4/2015

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Samiha Zubair

Date: 9/3/2015 7:41:00 AM

A good write. Brings back a lot of memories

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/9/2015 7:44:00 PM

Mario, this is sweet. One day I wish to have a vacation like this. Congratulations with your "Memorable Vacation win" Love LINDA

Mario De Paz
Date: 5/11/2015 5:00:00 AM

Thank you LInda, you are always so kind wiyh me

Skat A

Date: 5/9/2015 6:52:00 PM

Mario, congratulations in Shadow's contest. Forever SKAT

Mario De Paz
Date: 5/11/2015 5:01:00 AM

thank you, Skat, it is always a pleasure to hear from you

Jan Allison

Date: 5/8/2015 6:19:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Mario:-) Hugs Jan xx

Mario De Paz
Date: 5/11/2015 5:03:00 AM

Thank you Jan, I love your dropping back

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/8/2015 6:07:00 PM

lovely Mario congrats on placing hugs

Mario De Paz
Date: 5/11/2015 5:04:00 AM

thank you Shadow, it is very kind of you coming here

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/6/2015 6:54:00 AM

I like this one; best of luck.

Mario De Paz
Date: 5/6/2015 9:00:00 AM

Thank you so much for commenting and wishes

Jan Allison

Date: 5/4/2015 12:16:00 PM

ohhhhhh how romantic - where did this holiday take place ... tell me more!!!! hugs Jan xxx good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Mario De Paz
Date: 5/5/2015 2:32:00 AM

It was long time ago with my wife, before we got married. She lived in Rome and I lived in Genoa. That summer we went together nearby Rome at the sea coast on the beach every day ,,,,, Thanks for coming and commenting