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Medinah's Circle

A CFO chased cheaper resumes into my severance of free days. Safe in winter with my kids and Blue’s Clues, til Spring brought out the perks of community dues. Dawned smiles a first morning’s remark nurtured those long talks into the dark. Days pushed strollers on pathways to lunch dates from sidewalk chalk roses. Giggles, Hot Girl, and Tail Feather ringed by Ken. You brought them to us and a nick I would give them. Our neighborhood scripted a soap opera – auditions to the applause of butterfly wings. A soft breeze across your face, around your neck & down your back. Those best words not spoken, to sit, to patiently listen, was the aphrodisiac. Not quite crime scene technicians, but magicians, with a sleight of foot over one forgotten Trojan wrapper. Broken marriages hosted deck parties – surrogate spouses filled swimming pools, as hope tuned dreams and made love to sunsets. Drunk on new, need gave temptation Cupid’s arrows, smothered guilt’s cry with the pillows of our beds. A summer of secrets damned rumors that made us all liars, as children danced to the last ice cream truck melody. Autumn’s slow kiss took a ransom of leaves from every tree, shared blankets with afternoon movies, and laid lace among ribbons in your scrapbook albums. Just beyond left field, a store run’s moonlight, stenciled tree limbs on dashboards when the next morning was too long to wait. Halloween’s candies filled lines of cars, reflected quick glances while spouses handed out chocolate bars. At bedtimes, Robert’s “Sad Eyes” to kids I would sing, but really to us in what the coming winter would bring. By chance or retribution, unrequited arrows pinned our arms around mirages. Choked on mortars of blood and sand, squeezed clots of distilled pain, dripped accelerants in flash point solutions – we all burned down our own houses. Old vows came back to amend the suspicions that found everyone new homes, and made miles the walls from my best friend. Divine whispers of my reprimand, pressed a year & the balance of a lifetime, into the last hug goodbye – steadies the pulse of a remnant that keeps any reprieve from time’s hand. Thirteen years in five moves elsewhere, but my greatest sins and loves, still live there. ----------------------------------------------- Dedicated to an old friend, and to the only year I can’t keep buried. Last Contest: Secret Sponsor: Faraz Ajmal Previous Contest: Winds of Change Sponsor: Julie Rodeheaver

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Date: 12/29/2018 2:29:00 PM
It is a really nice poem and I really enjoyed reading it, many congratulations on your well deserved win in my contest, good luck my friend and have a really nice day
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Rob Carmack
Date: 12/29/2018 3:45:00 PM
Faraz - thank you for hosting the contest and for my placement.
Date: 9/3/2017 7:26:00 PM
Hi Rob, a captivating write. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 9/2/2017 11:17:00 AM
Great memories , Rob , congratulation on a great win.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 7/1/2017 3:28:00 PM
Hello Rob, A wondrous narrative full of many events and memories. Very creative and certainly written from the heart. Superb!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 6/4/2017 10:07:00 AM
A truly creative poem, Rob; had to read it a couple of times so as not to lose out on its flavor. Your style is unique! // paul
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Date: 6/4/2017 12:09:00 AM
I was mesmerized from start to finish! A most unique and interesting write!!
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Date: 6/3/2017 1:00:00 AM
Just came to bother you a third time tonight and say GOOD NIGHT for real this time. I can't take the shoulder any more. haha. Comments will have to wait till tomorrow!!
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Date: 5/30/2017 4:12:00 PM
Whoa! Soul check poetry, Rob. You grabbed my mind w/the opening lines, and kept my full attention unto the last uttered, wistful line. You have a fantastic way w/words. Great poem. May love light your path always.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/31/2017 4:24:00 PM
Thank you Freddie.
Date: 5/19/2017 9:43:00 AM
Rob, this is so filled with beautiful imagery. It's truly one of your best poems. Like me, I think you have your "very memorable years" and both of us go back in time to those deep lasting memories and write of them again and sometimes again. This memory has to be so bittersweet for you. A SEVEN. (very cryptic one as always with you, but I kind of understood it!!)
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/22/2017 2:01:00 AM
Thanx Andrea. She is one of the greatest friends I have ever had or ever will.

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