Me

“Me” The tender touch that whispers by… The breath from the rain I hold inside… To be inspired by the air I’m in… Writing it down with the slightest of grins… The stain on my canvas has spilled from my soul… Leaving a piece of me that will never grow old...

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 8/15/2013 1:52:00 AM

Awesome words you got up there Michael ;}

Skat A

Date: 4/17/2013 9:03:00 PM

Happy Birthday ~ LUV ~ SIDNEY

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/17/2013 12:59:00 PM

Happy Birthday Michael. Have an great day.

Poet Tacito

Date: 4/12/2013 11:20:00 AM

Hell yeah! I dig this! Just be sure to change "od" to "old", assuming that's what you meant. :) Excellent job!

Royal Ninja

Date: 4/10/2013 2:08:00 PM

of beauty this write is, very beautiful I thank you so much for your support Michael, a good friend you are and through this time friends and family is what i need, hugs-x, Royal

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/8/2013 8:49:00 AM

Michael; This is just beautiful and breath taking. A peace of you that will never grow old. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla

David Williams

Date: 4/7/2013 9:47:00 AM

Michael perfectly described I would say....David

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/4/2013 12:34:00 PM

Hey MJF, you probably typed fast again hey? Saw you spent some quality time with the elderly. Sounds like you had an awesome time ;) enjoyed reading this gem in unique MJF style ;) luv CTC

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/4/2013 6:00:00 AM

You poetry is always easy to read and flows so beautifully, the rhyme is also perfect within their confines! This one is no different, another exquisite write my friend, an awesome poem here Michael! I really enjoyed reading this illustrious piece this morning, what an enlightening poem, Great Work!!

Annie Lander

Date: 4/4/2013 5:36:00 AM

Me,You and I(:) touching...