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he is but an anchorite lost in the maze of life twisting along like a vine unable to scale the wall he is trapped somewhere inside his mind confined to a sinuous past a puzzle without pieces he questions the thorns of roses as they prick the blood from his fingers turning away from the paths of this garden neglected and choked in the vines of his past June 28 2020 Maze 10 word challenge Sponsored by A Dear Heart

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Date: 9/27/2020 8:01:00 AM
Excellent write
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Date: 8/13/2020 6:14:00 PM
Oh wow, beautifully done. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/1/2020 11:20:00 PM
To my favorite teacher of new words: thank you! I loved your free verse, and the word 'anchorite' that came along with it. You handled the 10-word challenge with ease (or so it would seem) with an intriguing tale told with your usual Sandra Adams flair. Loved the lines "somewhere inside / his mind / confined / to a sinuous past". Congrats on your win! hugs
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Date: 7/1/2020 3:30:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my maze contest with this wonderful poem _Constance
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Date: 7/1/2020 2:18:00 PM
This is really mysterious and thoughtful verse Sandra. An intriguing take on the theme. Congratulations on your win. :)
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Date: 7/1/2020 12:22:00 AM
We two wrote almost in the same tone.. Great write Sandra.. Congrats..
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Date: 6/30/2020 4:10:00 PM
Your muse hit the right notes Sandra. Congratulations on your win. Tom
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Date: 6/30/2020 8:03:00 AM
Well written Sandra! I hope all is well :)
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Date: 6/29/2020 5:57:00 PM
This is very good Sandy, no one writes free verse as you do, hope your muse keeps singing!
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Date: 6/29/2020 1:55:00 PM
Brilliant use of the 10 words Sandra, your muse is on fire. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Date: 6/29/2020 2:05:00 PM
Thank you my muse has been sleeping and only breaking through in little spurts for several months, today she wants to sing... maybe that is a good thing... hugs
Date: 6/29/2020 12:43:00 PM
A wonderful , sensitive and profound poem dearest, Sandra that touches the reader's heart. Hugs xxx
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Sandra Adams
Date: 6/29/2020 2:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Demetrios... my muse has awakened for a spell... hugs XoXo

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