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Matter's Illusion

Matter's eternal Not created nor destroyed Endlessly it is. Molecules combined Created life's illusion Serving no purpose Life makes no matter The burden of conscious thought purpose ever sought

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Kristina Reid-Hansen

Date: 2/18/2011 2:18:00 AM

NICE! It takes me back to my Quantum Physics classes...and I love it...a 7!

James Fraser

Date: 2/15/2011 2:06:00 PM

Terrific Haiku series Joe, love it....:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/14/2011 4:51:00 PM

A wow poem , joe,, enjoyed with great image .. love the perception you share with us,.... take care,.. And have your self a happy Valentine Day,..p.d.

Constance La France

Date: 2/13/2011 4:02:00 PM

I am always lost in thoughts , people will say, where are you? oh, writing a poem in my head, ha ha , your hakus are deep with thoughts~~

Diane Locksley

Date: 2/13/2011 5:29:00 AM

I can tell you are a deep thinker Joe. These haiku provide a lot of inspiration for thought. Best to you, Diane

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/13/2011 4:03:00 AM

Joe, we are all burdened by "conscious thought" as we try to sort through life's illusion. Indeed, matter is eternal but our thoughts seem fleeting. Well said, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 2/13/2011 1:22:00 AM

Nice Haikus on Matter and Life.Enjoyed--kashinath

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/12/2011 10:41:00 PM

HI, Joe, thanks for your sweet comment on my poem today. Of these, the first one is my favorite. I enjoyed the double meaning of Matter that was employed when you said Life makes no matter in the third one. NO matter about the matter! An interesting haiku string!

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/12/2011 9:27:00 PM

These are three decently written haiku. In the first line of your second entry, your word "molocules" is correctly spelled "molecules". Everything else looks fine.