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March Madness

march madness snow all melted frosted trees raped by the sun Dave Austin

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Date: 5/29/2016 12:48:00 PM
Ah Daver, this poem has made me look into the beyond.... Alice and March Hare: Quotes: Alice in Wonderland March Hare: ?Then you should say what you mean. Alice: I do; at least - at least I mean what I say -- that's the same thing, you know. Hatter: Not the same thing a bit! Why, you might just as well say that, 'I see what I eat' is the same as 'I eat what I see'! March Hare: You might just as well say, that "I like what I get" is the same thing as "I get what I like"! The Dormouse: You might just as well say, that "I breathe when I sleep" is the same thing as "I sleep when I breathe"!
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Date: 5/29/2016 11:25:00 AM
Surely the trees were finding those cold frosted suits had become burdensome? You have mastered the Haiku, which is a feat in itself! Love the image portrayed here.:) Keep well, love, Mikki
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Daver Austin
Date: 5/30/2016 9:37:00 AM
That's how I think any more, little spurts. Love 'n hugs. daver
Date: 3/18/2016 10:07:00 PM
hi, again, Daver. NO, keep this how it is!! Strong word but it goes with Madness of March.
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Date: 3/14/2016 2:11:00 PM
Good one, Dave! How are you doing anyhow? Your friend, Elaine
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Date: 3/17/2016 2:36:00 PM
That is one rape that no one regrets. Thanks for making my day, Dave. Elaine
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Daver Austin
Date: 3/17/2016 2:29:00 PM
Doing fine now that the sun has committed rape. Hardy harr, harr Love, Dave
Date: 3/12/2016 8:31:00 PM
Gotta love that March madness. Come, sun, and rape the trees harder. heehee
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Daver Austin
Date: 3/17/2016 2:27:00 PM
I guess rape is too strong a word. How about melt? Love, daver
Date: 3/12/2016 8:10:00 PM
Spring shall reap the dew...nice haiku
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Date: 3/12/2016 11:17:00 AM
Dave, here to in Canada, the snow is melting and it is wonderful, just like your haiku, I am loving this 7 ~
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