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Made of Finer Clay

There was a time I saw my mother's hands and noticed quite a difference between hers and mine hers were fine soft and smooth with lovely nails, refined While mine- so rough and dried no lotion could soothe or hide the blisters and the callouses while hers were fit for palaces mine were like a scullery maid's accustomed to hard work I often thought looking at her that we must have been made of different stuff for even though she was a simple woman no frills or fluff she seemed somehow to be made of finer clay Like porcelain- delicately enchanting but prone to chips and cracks while I, more like a sturdy stoneware strength and durability making up for what I lacked I never knew just how true this was until she died never realized just how fragile she really was, because she was the vessel that originally carried me

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Date: 11/2/2018 3:43:00 PM
Reminds me of myself and my mother, she was always so ladylike and I was more of a tomboy, but now she is in ill health and fragile, guess it's hard to see the flaws in the ones who once seemed so invincible-
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 11/2/2018 4:40:00 PM
Yes, it feels strange to watch your parents from a totally different perspective (as they age)...
Date: 11/1/2018 10:56:00 AM
This metaphorically wonderful poem is so well-thought out and executed, my friend. This really spoke to me. "she seemed somehow to be made of finer clay Like porcelain- delicately enchanting but prone to chips and cracks while I, more like a sturdy stoneware strength and durability making up for what I lacked." Beautifully done.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 11/1/2018 12:08:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! ;)
Date: 11/1/2018 10:46:00 AM
I love this one Rhona. Wonderful eloquent and poignant poem. xomo
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 11/1/2018 10:49:00 AM
Thank you so much for the lovely compliments! ;)

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