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A welcome sight the lights ahead - like misty globules on ink black foam The billboard elicits a sense of foreboding - Welcome to the Midnight Bazaar A lack luster moon adds to the mystery – nervously I enter to ask my way home A familiar song plays in the somewhere, the name eludes me - how bizarre Somberly dressed people scurry past- eyes focused on illuminated screens Refusing contact, shoving past rudely as I ask where this place would be One of them in riddles tells me - this is home - the place to be it seems I wonder if the scales of reality have tipped in favor of insanity A stall arouses my curiosity and I look as a butcher of sorts places Bleeding hearts getting desired effect - starts a pushing jostling frenzy Uninterested in the clowns on stilts with their painted morbid faces Children walk with sullen looks - expressionless eyes that fail to see Crowds clamor to buy sea food - how absurd - especially as a smell of decay prevails Fresh produce on sale with dyed color bleeding and truffles of mud is there something amiss A man wanders around with passports on offer - Buy yourself a Life - his sign displays Relief at last - a stall with books and maps – here is my escape from this tainted Abyss This God forsaken place is not where I wish to stay And I must strive to leave it before the light of day An exorbitant sum I pay eager to escape his cloying breath, his black toothed smile A commotion at the far end - some sort of bidding - curiously I venture courage giving me wings A sign proclaims ‘Souls For Sale’- in rage I scream ‘you cannot sell souls - This is so Vile ‘ Dark soulless eyes in chalk white faces – Bore right through me – Look right through me I run screaming, falling, clawing the map that shows all roads lead back to this Hell - I scream Waking myself - knowing the name of that song still in my head - Shaking from this macabre dream
Footnote: This was not meant to be a pretty poem. It exaggerates the state of a world that has seemingly lost its focus and empathy. Let's not let this happen Take a bit of Dean Kontz, Stephen King and the unnatural things going on with food enhancements and you have the stage set for a macabre nightmare!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/10/2017 1:30:00 PM
Maria, you wrote this so intimately that I felt pulled into this macabre scene with you. An intense and chilling write with vibrant and vile imagery that is heartrending as intended. The image and the music are haunting accompaniments that wondrously support your magnificent write. Excellent and enjoyed! Need a hug after this one... :)
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Date: 6/2/2017 7:14:00 AM
This is such a vivid work, it's imagery is amazing, I felt like I was there trying to escape also! I wrote some lyrics called wars turn, if you listen to it with this same melody of Mad World you will be able to visualize the melody. Amazing writing Maria!
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Date: 6/2/2017 7:54:00 AM
Thank you so much John for your generous and lovely comments. I will go straight to your Wars Turn now and have a look. I really appreciate your visit John.... Maria
Date: 5/9/2017 9:47:00 AM
I have already read the contest version, Maria; this consolidates my previous thoughts....an excellent dramatic rendition aided by both the pictures and the instrumental song itself. #7 Regards // paul
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Date: 5/11/2017 7:10:00 AM
Thank you Paul not only for the excellent review which you are so good at summarizing but also for the high rating. Your visits are always appreciated as as much as I love visiting your poems ... Maria
Date: 5/8/2017 12:38:00 PM
Love, and hope lay silently within such dreams as these, overridden by the horror of the moment. This poem is melodramatic and macabre, in its content and its delivery. And yet, I like this poem ..it flows well, the word choices are excellent, and the dark theme is consistent throughout.
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Date: 5/11/2017 7:08:00 AM
Thanks Emile, you have such a way with painting your comments just like you paint beautiful pictures in your poems. Thanks so much...Maria
Date: 5/8/2017 7:05:00 AM
A perfect blending of words and music that its final out come is simply majestic dear, Maria! A 7! Good luck!
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Date: 5/11/2017 7:06:00 AM
Thanks so much I really look forward to your visits and i really appreciate them dear friend....Maria
Date: 5/8/2017 6:31:00 AM
Mad World is one of my favourite songs, and the text is also very estranging (is that even a word?) This is a beautiful, very dark, intriguing poem that akes me feel dizzy inside. Not a good feeling, but that was exactly your intention. I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend :)
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Date: 5/11/2017 7:04:00 AM
Thanks so much Darren, I really appreciate your visit and comment. Sorry about making you dizzy though my friend.
Date: 5/8/2017 6:21:00 AM
Maria, this is brilliantly done. Your poem is absolutely stunning, with the perfect musical piece and picture in the background. We are caught in a decaying reality that unfurls like a nightmare; it touches on so many of today's issues that I was for a time speechless in front of this 'grande danse macabre'. A tour de force my friend. I'm gonna put you up there with Villon. 7+ & a favorite:) Amitiés
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Date: 5/11/2017 7:03:00 AM
Sorry that I'm late in thanking you for this one Anne-Marie,but oh my goodness this is praise indeed.Putting me up there with Villion, I'm speechless. What a compliment. Thank you for the high rating and visit my friend. Maria
Date: 5/8/2017 6:04:00 AM
Maria, this was way out there though still a bit of now rings in the echoes of your piece. This was absolutely fantastic and such a creative endeavor. The scene you create is haunting and nightmarish but written so well that I felt I was there, frightened and alone feeling this macabre setting gripping me and holding me fast. Love the passport salesman, the new life for a fee. An exceptional piece of writing. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 5/11/2017 7:10:00 AM
Thank you Chris for your nice summing up of the poem. Maria

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