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Mad As a Hornet

He spits his oatmeal all over the place; holds his breath, now he's got a blue face. He wants cookies and not just one. He throws a fit, if he gets none. He fell out of his chair and bumped his head. That made him mad, now his cheeks are all red. He pees his pants if he doesn't get his way. He's cranky 'cause he's not had a nap today. He wants another bottle so I tried to hide it. He toddles around to try and find it. He got it, now he's sucked it dry. He can't get enough of that good old rye. He's mad as a hornet with his stinger out. Another day in the life of Grandpa Stout!..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/27/2015 7:55:00 AM
Clever, creative, and funny. Love the twist at the end. Your writing is always a pleasure to read.
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Date: 10/23/2015 7:50:00 PM
Love it! This is good..... Fine sonnet , great creativity my friend. Super 7...
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Date: 10/21/2015 9:58:00 PM
You're such a clever one Arlene. Nice to be reading you again.
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Date: 10/21/2015 6:36:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem you made me giggle a 7 and good luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/21/2015 5:03:00 PM
Oh my gosh! This is so clever and entertaining, with an ending that kicks! I love the rhyme on every line. So very cute and creative ... CayCay
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Date: 10/21/2015 2:17:00 PM
Haha! I love it! Brilliant twist at the end!
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