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Machinating the manger scene The little shepherd sat at night and kept his sheep within his sight he gazed up at the starry night and saw one star was shining bright onto a solitary manger site inside a candle gave its light two images appeared in sight and in a straw crib was a child so beautiful with manner mild encompassed by a sandy drift he smiled and wished to give a gift and from a lamb its wool was sheared with nothing else though he still cared he rolled it into a wooly ball a present that he would recall he saw three figures enter near and stayed behind to watch with care gifts were presented with blessed intent one had offered a pleasant scent they bowed before them as they went Mary, the mother saw the boy and beckoned him to enter in she thanked him for the little toy I’ll remember you and the wooly ball “Your welcome ma’am, my name is Saul” Cool Writes and Imagination Contest Sponsored by Kim Rodrigues November 22, 2018 * Saul became Paul an apostle in later years

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Date: 12/31/2018 11:14:00 AM
I see you got a trophy win here. Wow, and a big congrats to you for that. Let me check my soupmail again to see if you have a note for me on the collab.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 3/20/2019 4:29:00 PM
Hi Andrea: The poem I collaborated is almost done. I'll send it to you to see if you can finish or change it
Date: 12/2/2018 8:09:00 PM
Hello Ralph, this is a beautifully creted poem written by you. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 12/3/2018 10:27:00 AM
Thank you , Darlene for your lovely comment.
Date: 12/2/2018 5:08:00 PM
Wow! This is brilliant, Ralph, and well deserving of a top win. I was totally engrossed by the story. We are wise to remember that it is not the quality of a gift, but the idea that we were remembered which means the most. Beautifully penned! Congrats on your win. Hugs, Carolyn
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 12/3/2018 10:29:00 AM
Thank you, Carolyn: It feels good to get 1st place once in a while.
Date: 11/30/2018 8:03:00 PM
Such a lovely Nativity poem, Ralph. Congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy win! And, I wish you a Blessed Christmas. Sandra
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Date: 11/30/2018 12:18:00 AM
I'm glad this got the trophy, it is deserved. Fine rhyme, imagery and story-telling via poetry. I truly enjoyed spending time with this poem. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 11/29/2018 2:56:00 AM
Happy Holidays, Ralph - blessings and sincere congratulations for your excellent win in Kim's "Cool Writes & Imagination" contest ... keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 11/29/2018 11:07:00 AM
Thank you, Gregory: It's nice not to get a N/A so often
Date: 11/28/2018 5:54:00 PM
love your spiritual write, Ralph, congratulations on your win...
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 11/30/2018 1:30:00 PM
Thank you, Eve: And I wish you happy holidays!
Date: 11/28/2018 2:53:00 PM
what a glorious inspiration for the season, ralph... best congrats on your highest spot... huggs
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Date: 11/28/2018 2:01:00 PM
Ralph, congrats on your trophy win for this wonderful Nativity poem. John
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Date: 11/28/2018 1:37:00 PM
Ralph, congratulations on your top win in my contest! You have depicted a lovely nativity where the rhyme scheme moves us at a fast pace through the scene. You bring us right into the stable, produce a “wooly toy”, gift us with the pleasant scent of gifts and in the end surprise us with a visit from “Saul”
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 11/29/2018 11:25:00 AM
Thank you for your consideration, Kim. I really feel honored.
Date: 11/28/2018 1:37:00 PM
an absolute joy to read and perfect for the time of year! Many congrats on your trophy win Ralph:-) hugs Jan xx
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 11/29/2018 11:22:00 AM
Thank you, Jan and a happy holiday to you and yours!
Date: 11/24/2018 7:10:00 PM
a Revelation! For me, I too thought of Saul who became paul. Nicely done.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 11/25/2018 8:13:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea: I hope you had a pleasant Thanksgiving
Date: 11/23/2018 7:03:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Heart I always think of the shepherds when this story is told. By the way, Saul became Paul in later years.
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Date: 11/22/2018 4:36:00 PM
Ralph, wow, I love this write of yours, it truly touched my heart, best of luck in the contest but this is a winner to me and a FAV ~
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