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Ludix-Rym

LUDi"x-Rym" I love you so from miles away Your face is before me all the day You stole my heart, what can I say All I know how to do is pray And hope that you feel the very same way That we could always be together, I pray I want you in my life to stay Each night close by my side to lay And when we both are old and gray We still join hands to kneel and pray Although we now are far apart I have love for you in my heart We have shared from the very start And hidden things deep in our heart Safe from others fiery dart I look upon you as my sweetheart And all the love I have to impart My blood pressure goes up high on the chart To me, you are my a-la-carte To choose each 'delicacy' but where do I start You have given me love so rare By taking lots of time to share What had been silent, hard to bear I love you so for going there To let me know you really care And I have so much love to share To have you in my arms I swear Would be impossible to compare Our being apart seems so unfair I sit alone and blankly stare My life will never be the same And what we have is not a game I keep your picture in a frame My friends ask me, what's her name Just a friend is all I will claim I seek no fortune, need no fame But her love forever, I'll acclaim You'll hear me daily breathe her name My love is something I can't tame I feel no guilt, I'll bear no blame So you know I love you come what may And want you by my side to lay I pray that we will never part It would surely break my heart As our bodies entwine while lying there Giving and receiving the love we share We make sweet love without any shame Setting both our hearts aflame When the joy of our love session is finally done We remain together, joined as one 21October 2019 For the contest sponsored by Lu Loo

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Beata Agustin

Date: 11/9/2019 12:37:00 AM

Wow! Congrats. God bless you. I'm delighted with these lines: "And when we both are old and gray We still join hands to kneel and pray." It's a blessing to see couples midst this scene.

Curtis Moorman
Date: 11/9/2019 3:43:00 AM

Beata, prayer is perhaps the most important facet of a Christian's life. Our Lord and Savior, Jesus Christ, often went off by Himself to pray to God, His Heavenly Father. If He, then, thought it important to pray, who are we to think otherwise. Thank you for your comments and faithful support over the years since I have been on Soup. I appreciate your friendship and covet your prayers.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/8/2019 8:27:00 AM

A beauty of a rhyme...lovely in content, Curtis! Congratulations, my friend!

Curtis Moorman
Date: 11/8/2019 8:51:00 AM

Thanks, Kim! That form is difficulty to say the least, but I "muddled" through it and got a 1st place ratinh! Thanks for your response!

Lu Loo

Date: 11/8/2019 4:39:00 AM

yay Curtis! I am SOOO pleased you tried this- you prevailed in rhythm and rhyme and wonder. I am never surprised to see you at top placement. Much deserved dear friend...CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR PLACEMENT AND THANK YOU FOR PARTICIPATING IN MY CONTEST. x:)-luloo

Lu Loo
Date: 11/8/2019 6:51:00 AM

Welcome! You did excellent! Thank you so much for trying it I'm glad you prevailed in this form. Congratulations again have a blessed day x:)-luloo

Curtis Moorman
Date: 11/8/2019 5:02:00 AM

Thank you, luloo! It was a tough one to write and I wondered if I got it right. Thank you for a 1st place in a fun contest.

Midnight Aurora

Date: 10/24/2019 4:11:00 PM

Wow I can't believe this does not have a comment. I've been reading some of your poems and this is just beautiful. My favourite so far. Very romantic.

Curtis Moorman
Date: 10/24/2019 5:12:00 PM

Thank you so much, Midnight! Such encouraging comments --- saying it's just beautiful and very romantic is a wonderful comment, but to declare it as your favorite is a distinct honor. I appreciate your comments.