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Loving a Woman

Foreplay starts hours before the bedroom. Leaving a note on your car while you’re working, As flowers are delivered in bloom. Later, rubbing your feet to ease the hurting. Over dinner, listening to your day. Engaging every detail as your best friend. Like when we first met, still the same today. One of the secrets, don’t let the courting end. Drawing a bath with popping bubbles. Oils and a couple from the ice cube tray. Solace for a night from life’s troubles, Starting down through pleasure’s parfait. My right hand sliding from your face, Over the ear to your hair it grasps. Our lips flowing together in a slow pace, As my left hand massages your ass with tight clasps. Laying you down under the light of the moon, Candle’s flickers dance among our needs. A cuddle making a fork from a spoon. Hot wax drips the body’s tense pleads. My tongue traces each of your curves. To make them all mine this night. Each part given what it deserves. Knowing where and when to bite. With the right pressure on every button, Finding and keeping the perfect rhythms. Loving you French, Greek, and Russian. In and out of all the positions. Two finger tricks in love and smut. Just two inches in, then up. Making a pea become a walnut. While your hands hold your legs like stirrups. Opening that box of our toys. Black leather with whips and chains. Clothes lines and collars employs Us playing Asphyxia’s dangerous games. From each encounter, perfecting my skill set, And if your heart ever turns to another, Your mind and body to never forget, When once and still I be, your greatest lover. ------------------------------------------------------------ Contest: Hotsy Totsy Sponsor: Rachel Firmin Written: 02.14.15 *Forever grateful to Dr. Ernst Gräfenberg (1881-1957) and every woman I’ve ever known*

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Date: 8/22/2020 10:53:00 AM
Is it wrong of me? - I can't stop laughing! Sorry, the comment section is hotter than your striking poem, Rob. That's no mean feat! As you point out, contest asked for sex. You delivered. Excellent rhyme throughout. This is a good poem. Last verse thoughtful lament really gorgeous, sums up your connection with your beautiful wife. Power to you, Rob.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 8/23/2020 6:13:00 AM
Yeah, that was the last time I entered one of her contests. I guess her toy box had different toys, or worse, no toys. Have to be careful with judges here, often they are short-sighted and inconsistent, but she still inspired this poem. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Date: 12/20/2016 11:15:00 PM
That poem went up and up and up to ooooh, boy! Amazing write, Rob :)
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Date: 1/2/2016 10:40:00 AM
Delightfully and tastefully erotic... many marvelous phrases, colorful imagery and fine abab rhyming. BRAVO Rob! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 10/27/2015 7:14:00 PM
Enjoyed the way you toyed, penning the moment.
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Date: 6/24/2015 8:39:00 AM
A warm write... Hey, I wonder what you mean by French, Greek and Russian positions, but tell me not. Julia, :)
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Date: 3/15/2015 10:12:00 AM
One of the greatest scenes to be apart of on this wonderful planet if I may say so. I've read the comments below and I'm on your side 100% - The images I viewed have probably been shared by many on this site. Fine poetry Rob, good luck in the contest, I hope it reaches the heights that love does, James :)
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Date: 3/15/2015 4:34:00 PM
Thanks James. The appeal of this poem may break along gender lines, but the defense of it shouldn't. It reached the height of N/A, but a lot of poems didn't make it, she placed few. Also, the spark of the convo with Andrea was speculative, not proven.
Date: 3/6/2015 6:07:00 PM
Hey, Rob, I have to disagree with you. There is no way that sadistic sex is hotsy totsy. Even 50 Shades of Grey was not bad until the ending when the guy showed the girl REAL sadism (even then ,not all that bad). but it just took a few strong spanks, and she left him!! Anyway, I think men and women disagree a lot along these lines. I came here to thank you for what you said on my pierced poem. It is beyond my comprehension to allow such pain to one you love. Guess why I could never be a God!
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Rob Carmack
Date: 3/7/2015 12:30:00 AM
If she wanted the contest limited to softcore, then she should have been explicit. She stated 'erotic' which includes everything, including activities much more extreme than the ones I included. She asked for erotic and that's what was delivered. Even considering the gender differences, she is old enough to know that without parameters, you are open to all the degrees.
Date: 3/2/2015 6:43:00 PM
oh my, you went all fifty shades of grey on this one. It's well done. but probably you did not win, right? Most women are turned off by this stuff at the end of the poem!
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Date: 3/2/2015 8:39:00 PM
I missed that rule of hers that stated to produce an erotic poem that appeals to most women. Perhaps, the judge didn't like it, if so, she should be more careful in what she asks for when theming contests. I was under the impression is was to be hotsy erotic, but maybe it wasn't to go past heavy petting.
Date: 2/22/2015 5:03:00 PM
Rob, sexxxy and very passionate poem you have penned for the hotsy totsy contest, a sure winner and thanks so much for your continuing support of my poetry ~~
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