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Loves Refrain

The tree bears our names Deep are the initials carved A heart and arrow Forever it will remain So long after loves refrain...

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/1/2011 7:59:00 AM

I had to laugh at my self for I thought oh 3 bears and then I read it again and got the message. A little slow on the uptake this morning Shar ha ha. Yes, those will remain for the lifetime of the tree and what a memory it will leave. love phyl

Deb Wilson

Date: 3/1/2011 3:37:00 AM

Aw this is so sweet! Really liked it..love,Deb

Christopher Marcum

Date: 2/28/2011 10:08:00 PM

smile -- i had to read your beauties opening verse twice my dear wondering if it were three bears or tree bears??? yet, the beautiful message is wonderfully clear that yes, true love shall forevermore transcend all of time ~ i could feel your lovely heart amid these soft pastles; sooo very beautiful ~ love, Always, christopher ~

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/28/2011 8:26:00 PM

One of the better tanka poems I have seen since I first entered this site a little over two months ago.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/28/2011 4:26:00 PM

very thoughtful expressions with analogy, Sharon