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Loves' Letter To Brown Sand

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Two individuals from a different world

They see each other several occasions

And each time the guy observes her and pays

close attention to every detail.

Though being the shy guy that he is,

small conversations proceed and due to the

little time that they have he discovers that she's special!

On the outskirts of a line comprised of two landscapes; The distinction is lost on how you've managed to captivate me. Afar, my pupils study you several times over; succeeded by dry run thoughts yearning to be verbalized. Words escape me walking on tiptoes, holding on the possibility that if heard, they stumble not to the fore of inexistence. Due to clocks power, a measure of petite conversations formulate in between. My aroused pupils correlate with yours...(SIGH) Your soul accompanied by the brown sand you're comprised of is indeed... Exquisite. Pace, G INK-U-SCRIPT

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 11/1/2019 12:19:00 AM

Wow I can never compare to this I'm lost in your words!;)

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 11/2/2019 12:04:00 PM

Hugs!!!! Thank you :)

John Fleming

Date: 8/20/2016 6:51:00 AM

Very charming, Pace...Really quite lovely - An undoubted seven! My very best regards...And warmest wishes. :) john

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/20/2016 9:27:00 AM

A great pleasure indeed to have you stop by...please don't be a stranger.

Jaquay Atkins

Date: 8/10/2016 9:12:00 PM

Thank you for showing love on my page and I'm really vibing to this one

Britney Kimbrough

Date: 6/30/2016 4:31:00 AM

Beautiful

Funom Makama

Date: 6/4/2015 10:36:00 AM

What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/12/2014 1:30:00 PM

What to echo your ending here, exquisite comes to mind Pace ;) enjoy the weekend and I hope you are doing good. Its been a while..

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/29/2014 2:45:00 PM

Beautiful, beautiful piece! How lovely and romantic! Well done my friend! Pandita

Kenisha Shines

Date: 9/6/2014 4:57:00 AM

you write such beautiful poems and its always pleasure reading them,i just love your writing.happy weekend.