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Love's Doubt

At the café over tea When our eyes meet The thought lingers He loves me… He loves me not? Holding hands On the beach Mind ponders He loves me… He loves me not? So many petals have been shed at this thought He loves me… He loves me not? All things spoken are just a blur, this query prevents me from falling in love.

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Darren Watson

Date: 1/28/2014 10:13:00 AM

Aha the problem I have wrestled with so often . Is it the butterflies of love I feel beating in my heart . Or the dark wings of a moth ? 3 Times I've uncovered the moth but i'll never stop trying to find the butterfly. The only way to find it is to let go. Enjoyed the poem,

Afroze Ali
Date: 1/29/2014 8:17:00 PM

Thanks for visiting. I am glad you enjoyed the poem.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2014 7:50:00 PM

Love this kind of writing. simple to understand and yet a deeper meaning. Good one.

Afroze Ali
Date: 1/24/2014 12:06:00 AM

Thanks Andrea!!!

Fahmida Islam

Date: 1/23/2014 6:43:00 PM

Nice poem